Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Private Practice (season 1)/archive1

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The list was promoted by The Rambling Man via FACBot (talk) 23:32, 20 February 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Private Practice (season 1)

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Nominator(s): Aoba47 (talk) 06:07, 20 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello everyone, this list is about the first season of the American medical drama Private Practice. I have recently expanded this list and I believe that it fulfills all of the criteria for a featured list. It is comprehensive in its content, and I have styled its structure after similar featured lists. I am still relatively new to working on lists, and putting something up for FLC so I would greatly appreciate feedback and comments on how to improve this and improve lists in general. Thank you in advance! Aoba47 (talk) 06:07, 20 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support The list looks fine to me. I didn't notice anything major that needs fixing. Good Luck. -- 1989 (talk) 14:24, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 15:59, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support on prose following these edits. Please revert if I have messed up anything. A few suggestions in the meanwhile:

  • Thank you for the copy-edits and I apologize for the silly mistakes that I overlooked. Aoba47 (talk) 20:03, 27 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Addison feels offended when none of her co-workers have R.S.V.P'd" - RSVP'd?
  • It is too informal so I have replaced it with "responded". Aoba47 (talk) 20:03, 27 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think you might need to link self-help book, but I don't feel strongly about it. – FrB.TG (talk) 19:56, 27 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 20:03, 27 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@FrB.TG:Thank you for the support, comments, and copy-edits! Aoba47 (talk) 20:03, 27 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support: After reading it few times, I did not found any problem with the article. It is definitely a deserving candidate.Krish | Talk 19:19, 1 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 21:48, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • " consisting of 9 episodes." nine per MOS.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Infobox heading should be "season 1" not "Season 1".
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • " The episodes also focus" why not "The season also focuses on..."?
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Check for WP:DASH violations (e.g. "The Complete First Season - Extended Edition" and several reference titles).
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • " March 16, 2009 in" comma after 2009.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • " had received the spin-off" do you mean "had been featured in the spin-off"?
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "on July 18, 2007 in" comma after year.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "October 18, 2007 after" ditto.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "New York Daily News " should be in italics.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "friends with benefits" is a dab link.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Complete First Season- Extended Edition[45][46]" space and en-dash needed.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Set Details" details.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Special Features" features.
  • Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "9 Episodes" episodes... plenty of over-capitalisation here.
  • Revised. I have kept a few things capitalized (Kate Walsh: Practice Makes Perfect and Alternative Ensemble: Behind the Scenes of Private Practice as they are the titles of the special features). I have corrected everything else. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 08:50, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • @The Rambling Man: Thank you for your comments. I believe that I have addressed all of them Please let me know if there is anything else that needs to be improved or revised. Aoba47 (talk) 15:40, 6 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support: I read through this page and my first thought was that it seemed more like an article than a list. However, it is strictly about a season and its episodes and I am no expert on TV, so after reading other articles, I understood its classification. That being said, this list rises above and beyond what typically covers seasons. It is well organized, well written and reliably sourced. I can see no outstanding problems, so you have my support vote! DARTHBOTTO talk•cont 20:09, 19 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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