Talk:Tom Harkin 1992 presidential campaign

Tom Harkin 1992 presidential campaign has been listed as one of the Social sciences and society good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 30, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 22:01, 9 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll give this a shot. Looks very good already. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 22:01, 9 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

General

• Can you maybe find better images? There are currently none of him during the campaign.
  • Unfortunately, I couldn't find any images on Wikimedia Commons that were of Harkin during the campaign.
• [1] This source describes his stance toward foreign policy as isolationist, while this one contests that claim. Both might be worth a mention. On a similar note, this source (admittedly from a bit before the campaign, but still relevant) states that he "proudly accepted the label of 'protectionist'".
  • Added references and edited article to include additional information.

Lead

• No issues here.

Background

• Again, nothing I would recommend changing.

Expressed interest

• Source 9 mentions that crime was one of the issues he wanted his party to work on. If you can find more on this, consider including it.
  • Edited article to make reference to crime.
• While the two journalists stated that his possible candidacy was "a long shot", he would most likely win that year's Iowa caucuses as a favorite son. I assume they stated both parts? It's worded confusingly.
  • Reworded to avoid confusion.

Campaign developments

• Going into January 1992, Harkin's fundraising had begun to slow down, and he was polling in the single digits in opinion polls held in New Hampshire. On the other hand, Clinton had continued to grow in popularity and fundraising. Connecting these as "[...] he was polling in the single digits in opinion polls held in New Hampshire, while Clinton had continued to grow in popularity and fundraising" might read better.
  • Combined the two sentences.

Aftermath

• Harkin would continue to serve in the Senate until retiring in 2015. It might be better to say "until his retirement in 2015".
  • Done.

Very few issues overall. There's nothing I would object to keeping the same if you really think it's best. This is quite an informative read. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 01:07, 10 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

JJonahJackalope, it's been a while with no response from you. Since I haven't found any other issues, I'm placing this on hold. An anonymous username, not my real name 02:15, 18 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

{{u|An anonymous username, not my real name]], sorry, I must have missed the notification that you performed this review, I'll go over your recommendations and make changes soon! -JJonahJackalope (talk) 05:15, 18 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

No problem, thank you. An anonymous username, not my real name 11:26, 18 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

An anonymous username, not my real name, Hey, just wanted to reach out to let you know that I've made some edits to address your comments in this review! Sorry again for the delay, but if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns, please let me know! -JJonahJackalope (talk) 18:22, 30 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

After another read-through, it seems ready. I will pass it. Great work. An anonymous username, not my real name 22:24, 30 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 04:41, 5 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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• ... that Tom Harkin ended his 1992 presidential campaign just one month after he won a landslide victory in the Iowa caucuses, where he received over three-quarters of the total vote? Source: Deseret News Los Angeles Times
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/TriGem

Improved to Good Article status by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 17:56, 2 December 2022 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @JJonahJackalope: Good article. Hook is interesting, article is a GA, and the QPQ is done. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:30, 2 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]