User contributions for Aharm
24 May 2021
- 14:0414:04, 24 May 2021 diff hist +1 Dale Arnold →Career: Possessive for day's (added the apostrophe) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 September 2019
- 04:2504:25, 20 September 2019 diff hist +15 What Up with That? Replace the term "encore" with "reprise" as it more accurately describes the recurrences of the song.
16 May 2019
- 02:0702:07, 16 May 2019 diff hist −54 m 30–30 club Remove extraneous definition of switch hitter. Almost anyone reading this article will know or can infer what switch is. Those who can't can follow the link.
8 May 2019
- 01:3001:30, 8 May 2019 diff hist +80 Guerin Austin Put current position with the Red Sox and NESN in the first paragraph.
11 April 2019
- 23:0523:05, 11 April 2019 diff hist −7 Aerosmith →Formation (1964–1971): remove slight ambiguity in wording
22 February 2019
- 01:4101:41, 22 February 2019 diff hist −4 m Cale Makar Remove "the" in "the Hockey East".
22 March 2018
- 03:0803:08, 22 March 2018 diff hist −19 Ryan Donato →International play: . Various grammatical improvements
19 March 2018
- 00:1600:16, 19 March 2018 diff hist −32 Pac-12 Conference →Full members: Removed the nonsense about the arbitrary regional spreading of the member institutions. The sentence should probably be removed completely anyway, because it's not really a unique situation for major conferences.
11 March 2018
- 03:1303:13, 11 March 2018 diff hist +10 2011 Big East men's basketball tournament →Championship Game: Improved notation of seed vs poll ranking
15 December 2017
- 01:3501:35, 15 December 2017 diff hist +7 m The Killing Fields (film) →Plot: Minor edit to imply that there were multiple killing fields.
3 November 2017
- 13:5513:55, 3 November 2017 diff hist +27 Viet Cong Added context of the Vietnam War in the opening paragraph
3 July 2016
- 02:5702:57, 3 July 2016 diff hist +19 m Banana production in the United States grammar
27 May 2016
- 14:1714:17, 27 May 2016 diff hist +8 Mount Everest →Discovery: Changed the name of this section to "Western Discovery". The section only mentions exploration and survey by Brittish personnel, without any mention of the possibility that Sherpa communities may have known about the mountain.
16 May 2015
- 04:3504:35, 16 May 2015 diff hist +17 m Steve Lyons (baseball) →Professional career: added Red Sox to major league debut. Omitting this detail here forces the reader to read the previous section
29 April 2015
- 05:0105:01, 29 April 2015 diff hist +8 m Fremont Street Experience added an adjective to "the attraction is" since there are clearly several attractions
28 November 2014
- 04:3404:34, 28 November 2014 diff hist −35 m A Different Kind of Truth That Wolfgang is the son of Valerie Bertinelli is extraneous for the first paragraph of this article. The info is available elsewhere in the page and on his individual page.
- 04:3104:31, 28 November 2014 diff hist −8 m A Different Kind of Truth remove "bassist" redundancy
9 September 2014
- 19:5919:59, 9 September 2014 diff hist −21 m Cole Valley, San Francisco →Location: Waller St is the generally accepted north boundary of Cole Valley. Per me (resident) and Google Maps.
4 June 2014
- 15:5915:59, 4 June 2014 diff hist −124 m Movin' Out (Anthony's Song) →Rock Band music gaming platform: Remove Rock Band marketing verbiage.
18 May 2014
- 13:5313:53, 18 May 2014 diff hist +26 Beachin' Add video location
22 October 2013
- 01:4301:43, 22 October 2013 diff hist +2 m I Have Nothing Changed "As of most of" to "As with much of" for accuracy and clarity
30 August 2013
- 03:3403:34, 30 August 2013 diff hist 0 m David Gilmour →Pink Floyd: change "energy consuming" to "energy-consuming". It makes the sentence more readable.
11 July 2013
- 20:2920:29, 11 July 2013 diff hist −2 m She's a Bad Mama Jama (She's Built, She's Stacked) sweet Style change
- 19:5519:55, 11 July 2013 diff hist +41 She's a Bad Mama Jama (She's Built, She's Stacked) Fix link to Big_Bad_Mamma
- 19:5419:54, 11 July 2013 diff hist +1 She's a Bad Mama Jama (She's Built, She's Stacked) No edit summary
- 19:5319:53, 11 July 2013 diff hist +29 She's a Bad Mama Jama (She's Built, She's Stacked) reference to Big_Bad_Mamma, which samples this song
14 May 2013
- 13:3413:34, 14 May 2013 diff hist +1 m Johnny Pesky →Later years: - typo fix (know -> known)
17 December 2012
- 16:2616:26, 17 December 2012 diff hist +17 m Costa Rica →Economic growth: internal wiki hyperlink to oxcart
13 April 2012
- 16:5916:59, 13 April 2012 diff hist −400 American Restoration →Description: Show's pre-release name is not perinent enough to be the lead sentence in the description
13 August 2010
- 15:0815:08, 13 August 2010 diff hist +4 m Hudson Yards, Manhattan West Side Yard hyperlink in image caption
18 July 2010
- 03:2703:27, 18 July 2010 diff hist −10 m Kenner Star Wars action figures removed the word "prominent" from the first sentence. If indeed there are over 90 unique figures, then certainly there were some made of characters that were not prominent.
4 January 2010
- 02:4302:43, 4 January 2010 diff hist +12 m MetLife Stadium Improve links to in reference to Super Bowl XLVIII
- 02:4002:40, 4 January 2010 diff hist +4 m Super Bowl XLVIII Added a hyperlink to Super Bowl
15 December 2008
- 20:5420:54, 15 December 2008 diff hist −661 m Palm Springs, California →Climate: remove duplicate temperature listing
7 November 2008
- 15:1915:19, 7 November 2008 diff hist +214 Talk:Thomas Finneran added section on the Opening Section
12 September 2008
- 17:3117:31, 12 September 2008 diff hist +509 Talk:Guns N' Roses →Over emphasis of Chinese Democracy in the first section.: new section
- 17:2517:25, 12 September 2008 diff hist +13 m Guns N' Roses →Formation
10 September 2008
- 14:2114:21, 10 September 2008 diff hist +496 m Talk:Chex Mix →Structure of the article: new section
21 August 2008
- 13:5913:59, 21 August 2008 diff hist +3 m Geography of Portugal Small gramatical change in Natural hazards:
15 July 2008
- 17:0217:02, 15 July 2008 diff hist +23 m Chocolate Rain Clarify famous caption
2 June 2008
- 20:0720:07, 2 June 2008 diff hist −16 m Lou Merloni Fixed LA Angles link
29 April 2008
- 13:3613:36, 29 April 2008 diff hist +5 m Keane (band) Undid revision 208990685 by Aharm (talk)
- 13:3413:34, 29 April 2008 diff hist −5 m Keane (band) →Members: - removed the word "live" from backing vocals. This word was probably included as a copy / paste error.
20 December 2007
- 22:2022:20, 20 December 2007 diff hist +6 Prohibition in the United States Improve introduction. I'm not saying it is perfect. But it is certainly an improvement
29 November 2007
- 19:4919:49, 29 November 2007 diff hist −7 m Memorial Stadium (University of Illinois) remove redundant adjectives. Improve links to be pertinent
17 October 2007
- 17:1417:14, 17 October 2007 diff hist +4 m BASE jumping →Comparison with skydiving: Link to Terminal Velocity
11 September 2007
- 19:0119:01, 11 September 2007 diff hist 0 m Valencia CF →Valencia makes a mark in Europe: Fix plural possessive
- 18:5618:56, 11 September 2007 diff hist −42 Tunisia →Language: Clear up the dialect section a bit
- 18:4818:48, 11 September 2007 diff hist −62 Tunisia →Language: - Clear up the description of the use of foreign phrases
31 August 2007
- 20:3420:34, 31 August 2007 diff hist −305 McMuffin Remove editorial on regional variations.
