Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Edwin Taylor Pollock

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Edwin Taylor Pollock

Self-nom. Recently passed GA, had a productive peer review which appears to have quieted down. This is my first real attempt at a detailed officer biography. JRP 03:14, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

• Support. I think it's a good article ready for A status. Needs more detail about his childhood/adolescence and his post-Navy life and the red links should have stub articles created for them, but, good enough for "A". Cla68 04:19, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
• Weak support Seems a good enough article, but indeed pre and post navy life sections are missing. Arnoutf 10:37, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
• Support Add pre- and post navy life section(even if they are not notable parts of the biography) and get one of our copyeditors to improve the writing style before nominating it for FA. Wandalstouring 12:48, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
• Support, although I would stress that the article really does need to be expanded either side of his navy career. Carom 21:37, 14 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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