Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/A-class review/Ed Hochuli

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The result was fail due to lack of comment.

Ed Hochuli

I feel this biography is complete and meets the criteria for being an A-class article. RyguyMN (talk) 19:01, 16 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - the names of his six children are listed, but the names of his ex-wives aren't. They probably should be. Other than that, not many real reservations that I can see. I'll do a more thorough review later. John Carter (talk) 14:32, 17 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks John for taking time to review this article. I know you have review some of my work in the past, so I thank you again. The name of his second ex-wife is Brenda, but I'm not able to locate any details of his first wife. Do you believe it is relevant to the article to have both ex-wives? Thanks! RyguyMN (talk) 01:04, 21 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

It would be relevant. If you can't find them, though, you can't find them, and that can't be held against the article. John Carter (talk) 23:58, 7 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry John, but I can not locate a name of the first ex-wife anywhere. RyguyMN (talk) 05:54, 9 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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