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Psycho (Red Velvet song)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I've managed to bring it to good article (GA). I hope "Psycho (Red Velvet song)" potentially become a featured article (FA) in the future. Thank you so much.

Thanks, LipaCityPH (talk) 14:18, 7 January 2021 (UTC)LipaCityPH (talk) 14:17, 7 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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SandyGeorgia

• My general advice for FAC is at User:SandyGeorgia/Achieving excellence through featured content (in particular, the links at the bottom).
• You can install User:GregU/dashes.js to keep your dashes and hyphens in order (see WP:ENDASH and WP:EMDASH).
• Good use of |trans-title on citations!

@SandyGeorgia: Thank you so much! LipaCityPH (talk) 10:38, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• 10 Charts
  • 10.1 Weekly charts
  • 10.2 Monthly charts
  • 10.3 Year-end charts

See WP:MSH ... don't repeat headings at lower levels ... should this be Weekly, Monthly, Year-end ?

• Composed by Andrew Scott, Cazzi Opeia, and EJAE ... what is EJAE ??

@SandyGeorgia: That is how the name was stated in the liner notes of the album and websites that talks about the writer of the song. LipaCityPH (talk) 10:38, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• ... it is about how two are in a complicated relationship. I don't know what this means.
• Along with the accompanying gothic-themed music video, the song was released digitally as the lead single from Finale, and the third single overall from The ReVe Festival on December 23, 2019. ... This is not grammatically sound .. it may be helpful to approach WP:GOCE about a copyedit.
• Following the group's third concert, La Rouge, in November 2019, ... start of a new section, the group should be defined by name.
• Have a look at the excellent essay about how to write reception sections at WP:RECEPTION.

The prose is not quite at FA standard, and approaching WP:GOCE might be a good idea. Good luck! SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:02, 1 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@SandyGeorgia: I just read this now. I'm going to do this after reading your instructions. Thank you so much and sorry for the inconvenience. LipaCityPH (talk) 09:55, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@SandyGeorgia: I have submitted a request for a copyedit in GOCE just to let you know. :) LipaCityPH (talk) 10:42, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]