Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive 9

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This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up.

August 2017

 Fixed by another user. North America1000 06:46, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

July 2017

 Done. Use Template:Clarify in its confusing areas. Wyliepedia 23:31, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 Done by Derek R Bullamore with further cleanup by me. Wyliepedia 22:54, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 Done AmericanAir88 (talk) 03:05, 8 September 2017 (UTC)

June 2017

  •  Done
  • Self-love, needs clean up badly, with wording, tone, lead improvements, and organization. Tinton5 (talk) 06:13, 6 June 2017 (UTC)
  •  Done
  •  Done
  •  Done

May 2017

 Done
  •  Done
 Done
 Done by Derek R Bullamore. Wyliepedia 00:10, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
 Done by User:ThinkHat. Wyliepedia 22:59, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 Done by Maria Faith Tabotabo Tijani Mordecairule 19:40, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
  •  Done
  •  Done

April 2017

  •  Done
 Done. Wyliepedia 00:18, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
  •  Done Mordecairule 19:37, 13 September 2017 (UTC)

February 2017

January 2017

  • Automotive industry. Returning to WP from a sabbatical, I have started some spring cleaning on this important page. It and I need all the help we can get. BsBsBs, 02:08, February 5, 2017 (UTC)
@BsBsBs: You need to tell us exactly what needs cleaning up in the article. I've just been on it and I haven't found any errors. Plum3600 (talk) 16:27, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Does not appear to need cleanup. North America1000 17:40, 23 September 2017 (UTC)

December 2016

  • Heather Hardy - Repeated sources throughout article. Some sources being included 50 times throughout a single page. 17 sources cited, but repeated 300 times..
 Fixed Boomer VialHolla! We gonna ball 01:58, 18 February 2017 (UTC)

November 2016

 Fixed Ayub407talk 09:04, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
  •  Fixed: Another user performed the editing. North America1000 03:02, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 Done

October 2016

  • Does not appear to have cleanup issues at this time. North America1000 03:11, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 Done

September 2016

 Fixed by BlackRoberts. Ayub407talk 10:22, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Grace VanderWaal – Article needs more filling and better layout than the bare minimum. Very fresh article. Mr. Magoo (talk) 14:43, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
 Done Mr. Magoo (talk) 10:58, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
 Partly done Removed a lot of the numerous awards/titles/books etc that were unlinked. Boomer VialHolla! We gonna ball 04:42, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
Fixed bare urls and other formatting errors, but the article still has plenty of problems. Leschnei (talk) 01:52, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
 Done
 Done

August 2016

  •  Fixed since August. — Wyliepedia 10:08, 5 February 2017 (UTC)
8 of the bare URL's - still some to do Zanoni (talk) 20:03, 6 September 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Completed remaining bare URLs. C0nanPayne (talk) 21:56, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
 Fixed a bunch of dead links and bare urls. Leschnei (talk) 01:30, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Ayub407talk 11:17, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
  • IBM – Bare urls for PDF file references and a few additional formatting errors in the references. North America1000 16:16, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed AndiPersti (talk) 18:22, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Ayub407talk 07:26, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed the access date format error. Ayub407talk 07:55, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
It's been addressed (by another user). North America1000 16:19, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
The article was merged to Sodexo; the content is appropriate at this time. North America1000 16:20, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
  • Square Yards - Bare urls and numbered links in references. Ayub407talk 11:54, 19 August 2016 (UTC)
     Done

July 2016

 Fixed C0nanPayne (talk) 22:41, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
 Done

June 2016

 Fixed. Ayub407talk 09:17, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Ayub407talk 19:04, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
Fixed the problematic references and did a bit of copyediting. Leschnei (talk) 17:40, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Simone Lange – May I request that someone double-check this, since I am a German native speaker and my English might not be perfect. Thanks! --TobbiM (talk) 22:09, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
I did a bit of editing for the wording and added tags. Anarchyte (work | talk) 07:46, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Fair City - This article needs a major ref cleanup. Other than that, it seems fine to me. Tails3333 (talk) 18:01, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
Update - I cleaned up the article a bit. Tails3333 (talk) 18:59, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed - I fixed one bare url the other references look fine. Leschnei (talk) 01:22, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
 Done Mordecairule 19:00, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
 Done

May 2016

Cleaned up Leschnei (talk) 19:02, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
Cleaned up Scotteaton92 (talk) 14:28, 20 May 2016 (UTC)
  •  Fixed. Mr suntan407talk

April 2016

  • All articles within category Category:Unincorporated communities in New Jersey. Consistency is needed in all entries, including subcategory/parent category fixings, some have two maps, some have one, flag icons in infoboxes, etc. Discussion has taken place about category and map issue. Pages should include only one map. It was still left up in the air if parent category should remain. Tinton5 (talk) 00:20, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
Has been fixed. Tinton5 (talk) 01:31, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

January 2016

 Fixed Leschnei (talk) 17:40, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Actually, the article still has several bare urls. North America1000 02:25, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
Oops, not sure how I messed this up, but I think it's fixed now. Leschnei (talk) 18:05, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

November 2015

  • Registered nurse – Clean up needed as well as globalization matters. Also, clean up needed in references section. Tinton5 (talk) 04:58, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
Cleaned up a bit. Tinton5 (talk) 00:15, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

September 2015

Bare urls fixed by other users. Ayub407talk 18:48, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
  • Acephala group – An article about cultivars of Brassica oleracea, it is tagged for reorganization, bare urls (many of which are embedded in the citations) and lacking a lead section. North America1000 09:48, 18 September 2015 (UTC)
Lead line appears to be added before I started to cleanup. I've fixed the bare urls issue. Ayub407talk 18:44, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed I have performed additional edits. This has essentially been fixed now. North America1000 02:58, 1 January 2017 (UTC)

June 2015

  • Suzlon Energy – Significant formatting errors in the references section. Inline citations need formatting. North America1000 11:00, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 Done

May 2015

  •  Done

April 2015

 Fixed Ayub407talk 17:29, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
  •  Done

March 2015

 Fixed the bare urls by using Reflinks. I also found 5 bare dead links. Ayub407talk 07:03, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
 Partly done Has intermingled bare urls in the references section at this time. North America1000 15:35, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Bare urls and dead links C0nanPayne (talk) 19:45, 25 February 2017 (UTC)
 Done

February 2015

 Fixed Lots of reformatting of references and some copy-editing. Leschnei (talk) 00:00, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
Note: This one above, along with many others, also need some rewording, especially in lead paragraph. Tinton5 (talk) 20:11, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed I reworked the references and copyedited the text, including the lead. There are 4 dead links that I couldn't fix. Leschnei (talk) 16:31, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Ayub407talk 11:53, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
Not a very focused article, but the references look OK. Leschnei (talk) 01:30, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Wellwer website seems down, all references are non-English -- Youssef (talk) 14:32, 15 February 2015 (UTC)
  • No cleanup request has really been provided here. North America1000 03:37, 1 January 2017 (UTC)

January 2015

  • The articles below need bare url cleanup.
NORTH AMERICA1000 22:07, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

October 2014

 Fixed and archived wherever necessary but I found 2 dead link so I couldn't fill them. Ayub407talk 16:59, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed long back by other users. Ayub407talk 12:03, 7 August 2016 (UTC)

September 2014

 Fixed: found only one bare reference and fixed it. Ayub407talk 12:10, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
Update: Started working on this page and reorganizing the information. The bio/career section is a mess. Kobuu (talk) 19:32, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
Article improved. Tinton5 (talk) 06:21, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

April 2013

  • Paper Rad - Article appears to be mostly COPYPASTA from an editor's academic paper, written in a very heavily biased and wordy fashion. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:13, 18 April 2013 (UTC)
Attempted to lessen the one-sided, grandiloquent writing by (hopefully) removing personal observation, interpretation, and synthesis. Not perfect by any stretch. More help is welcomed! :D Cyphoidbomb (talk) 05:55, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
I think that you cleaned it up quite well. I did a little more copyediting and fixed some bare urls. I would call this  Fixed. Leschnei (talk) 18:53, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
  • John Enos III - Page is a mess. The entire lead is one big clump of info, which needs to be trimmed and layout better. Tinton5 (talk) 21:35, 19 April 2013 (UTC)
  •  Done

January 2013

More archived posts (unsorted list)

  • Stated concerns no longer exist in the article. North America1000 20:35, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Modena Park 2017 - The article is eligible for DYK, but need cleanup because of "broken English". Can you help me please? --Holapaco77 (talk) 06:00, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
  •  Partly done
  •  Partly done: Partially done. Citation errors are fixed. Most remaining bare urls are also dead links which will require retrival at the webarchive. Phatom87 (talk contribs) 19:09, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
  • I fixed the bare urls but there are other problems. See the article's talk page. — DavidConrad (talk) 04:35, 2 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Stated concerns no longer exist in the article. North America1000 20:29, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
@Northamerica1000: I've just checked the article and the only think that is missing is the title when you cite the references. What errors did you see? Plum3600 (talk) 14:10, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Hi Plum3600: The titles missing create a bunch of red-colored notices stating "Missing or empty |title=", and there are many bare urls in the references section, although they are within citation templates. North America1000 18:05, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
 Partly done – Title errors fixed. Still has bare URLs though. Someone needs to utilize web archive to find the webpages in reference otherwise the links just lead to 404 errors which are not really proof. Mordecairule 18:25, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Does not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 20:28, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Does not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 20:29, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Derek R Bullamore fixed the urls and I nested the film posters better. Personally, I would have cut them altogether, but there are no articles to use them in. Wyliepedia 23:09, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
  • I performed some image layout. Issues are essentially resolved at this time. North America1000 20:53, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Manuel José Ossandón – Every source is a bare url, and uses unreliable sources (Wikipedia articles) to verify content. Also has no links to other articles as of this post. North America1000 04:11, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Stated concerns no longer exist in the article. North America1000 20:50, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Does not have bare urls now. Withdraw the rest of the nomination. North America1000 20:57, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Withdraw. Per WP:BURL, "Note that some citation styles, such as the MLA style, use full bibliographic citation that happen to display the text of the URL in addition to proper identifying information, like the author, date, and title of the publication. These are not considered bare URLs." North America1000 20:42, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Does not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 20:18, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Does not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 20:22, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Does not require cleanup at this time. North America1000 20:25, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
I removed bare URLs, but the article is still marked for globalization.
  • The problems noted above are not present on the page at this time. North America1000 20:01, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Article is presently a WP:GA, so this has very likely been addressed. North America1000 19:59, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Prayag Jha – Needs copy editing to address promotional tone, improve cohesion, and to address peacock words/language. North America1000 04:07, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
  • Was redirected to Steven Emerson on 22 November 2015‎, and that article has received many copy edits since this time. North America1000 18:27, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
  • The article has 70 inline citations at this time. North America1000 18:19, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
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