Wikipedia:Cleanup/Archive 8

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This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up.
Copyvio problems, now in list format Fuebaey (talk) 16:03, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
Re-wrote the entire article. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 16:52, 31 January 2013 (UTC)
I copyedited the whole thing, formatted all of the sources properly, added an infobox, started the talk page with a header that it was under the scope of WikiProject Visual arts, and added a stub tag at the bottom. öBrambleberry of RiverClan 16:18, 28 February 2013 (UTC)
  • Skye Townsend - needs additional sources and minor formatting improvements, also needs more categories. Tinton5 (talk) 21:37, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
Cleaned up a bit, and added categories. Tinton5 (talk) 21:33, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
 – I've performed page cleanup and some copy editing; the article would still benefit from more copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 14:54, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
I've cleaned up grammar and syntax and removed the copy edit tag. I don't know how to show a strike-through of this project here.Coaster92 (talk) 01:52, 21 March 2013 (UTC)
Since deleted and rewritten Fuebaey (talk) 15:55, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Hotklub - An unsourced article that would benefit from copy editing, layout clean-up and sources. Northamerica1000(talk) 23:15, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
    • Update: This article was deleted in September. Digifiend (talk) 14:03, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
  • Eliza Taylor-Cotter - General clean up of reference formatting and page formatting is needed. Grammar and punctuation as well. Tinton5 (talk) 21:52, 6 March 2013 (UTC)
I worked on grammar and punctuation along with others and that seems to be handled.Coaster92 (talk) 22:28, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
Page has been fixed up. Tinton5 (talk) 17:38, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Ram Revilla, already a poorly written article, has been bombarded with massive amounts of unsourced detail that is probably a violation of WP:BLP. I recommend the page be stripped of all the huge cruft, with the needed information carefully reinserted. Beerest355 Talk 17:15, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
Removed some unsourced trivia and obituary-like information. Also rearranged the sections and did some minor formatting. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 13:00, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Rasoolpur needs an assessment of notability, fact checking, NPOV and citations. Kenfyre 17:37, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
I've cleaned it up, but managed to find two not so good sources for it. It goes back to a stub. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 10:56, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
Did some minor formatting, couldn't see any major clean-up problem. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 13:14, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
Already done thanks to another editor. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 13:03, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Narayan Dutt Shrimali - An article about an Indian astrologer. Please check for notability and consider deletion. It has lots of material with no citations. - Kenfyre (talk) 10:07, 10 September 2013 (UTC)
I've removed the unsourced promotional content and stubbed it; the subject seems notable enough when I tried searching. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 13:31, 10 September 2013 (UTC)
 Done. It has been fixed by now. Zezen (talk) 14:22, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
 Done. Much had been achieved since the original listing. Have removed much of the COI and POV in a general tidy up. --Haruth (talk) 18:06, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
 Done. General cleanup for readbility. Bunch of additional tags for specialists to address. --Haruth (talk) 15:11, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Shit - Has a cleanup tag placed in June 2011, with no specific cleanup rationale provided. Immediate cleanup matters from my assessment here involve copy editing and adding sources.Northamerica1000
It does not look thaat bad. I would just remove the cleanup tag. Zezen (talk) 14:46, 1 January 2016 (UTC)

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 Done Harsh edit, removing original research and details not relevant to the article title. --Haruth (talk) 23:55, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Baz Mohammad Mubariz - where to start? No paragraphs, no sections, no sources, no wikilinks, no indication of importance or notability. Might even be a speedy. MaxBrowne (talk) 16:02, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
Update: The article was deleted per the delete result at the article's AfD discussion. Northamerica1000(talk) 08:44, 29 November 2013 (UTC)
I've performed some preliminary cleanup. The article would certainly benefit from improved sourcing and further copy editing. Northamerica1000(talk) 08:53, 29 November 2013 (UTC)
I did some minor copy editing. The article still needs more sources. Bold Edits (talk) 19:37, 16 December 2013 (UTC)
 Done Has been stripped down to a basic list at some point. --Haruth (talk) 22:28, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
 Done Shuffled out in the intervening years. --Haruth (talk) 00:28, 21 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Tori Kelly - Needs formatting and clean up, as well as extra sources and links. Tinton5 (talk) 20:41, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
 Done Reviewed - has been well developed since 2013.--Haruth (talk) 23:16, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
 Done Appears to have been completed rewritten. Removed tags. --Haruth (talk) 09:52, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Multifaith space: Highly opinionated and biased. Already deleted some obvious parts.--Cobalt174 (talk) 19:32, 28 December 2013 (UTC)
 Done Would benefit from additional sources. --Haruth (talk) 12:24, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
 Done General clean up, but the Plot section is undecipherable unless you know the movie. Added copyedit template - likely to just be a closk reset, so watch this space... --Haruth (talk) 15:11, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
  • List of FIFA Club World Cup broadcasters - the majority of the citations are referring to the UEFA Champions League instead. As a result, the majority of the information in the table is incorrect. Major cleanup needed. Digifiend (talk) 00:20, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
 Done Impossible to tell, as all UEFA links are dead. Removed deadlinks & cleanup template, added unreferenced tag. + AfD --Haruth (talk) 09:52, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
Update- Title has been moved. Tinton5 (talk) 23:58, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
 Done Appears to be completely rewritten. Of its type, more than adequate. --Haruth (talk) 09:52, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: As of this note, this article looks pretty clean. There are some sources needed for quotes but a solid article. Kobuu (talk) 19:00, 5 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Applied Bunch of Special Means - Article is likely about a notable topic but is incomprehensible as written. It was almost certainly created by someone whose first language is not English. Even the title may be a poor translation. -Ad Orientem (talk) 20:10, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Redirected to Special Purpose Police Unit (Azerbaijan). That article has more relevant information and sources. Kobuu (talk) 15:10, 2 September 2014 (UTC)
Update The references in this article have been fixed.   ArcAngel   (talk) ) 15:09, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Cleaned up this section. Didn't look at the rest of the article though. Kobuu (talk) 18:40, 5 September 2014 (UTC)
  • 3333 Broadway, lead needs clean up (possibly rewording), as well as more sources needed and several sections may include excessive detail and may be too wordy. Also, not enough hyperlinks. Tinton5 (talk) 00:12, 4 August 2014 (UTC)
Update: Began working on this one. Added infobox and sorting through the large blocks of text. Kobuu (talk) 15:03, 25 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Gator In The Bay, wording, confusion in lead needs to be addressed (is it an actual alligator or is it art?), sources, etc. Tinton5 (talk) 00:12, 4 August 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Cleaned up! Feel free to add images! Kobuu (talk) 14:27, 5 September 2014 (UTC)
  • John_Bowle_(writer) needs attention to COI issue raised there. "--->COI ALERT: I (deisenbe) am the author of the article just cited. I believe an exception to the policy of not citing your own work should be made. I don't know how to request this, so I'm leaving it here for someone more knowledgeable to deal with."
 Fixed: Not seeing the COI alert on this article. Cleaned up the references but the article looks fine to me. Kobuu (talk) 14:36, 5 September 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Major cleanup. Sections, filmography, sources organized, backlinked from the films, wikilinked, infobox added. Could do with some pictures and more content but otherwise, looking pretty good now! Kobuu (talk) 15:24, 5 September 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Fixed Bare URLs. Kobuu (talk) 13:22, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Adamson University College of Pharmacy - minor clean up needed, and possible expansion ? Tinton5 (talk) 16:34, 28 September 2014 (UTC)
Update: Added PROD to this page. This particular college at Adamson University doesn't need its own article. Kobuu (talk) 18:03, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Article is now deleted. Kobuu (talk) 20:45, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Aaryn Doyle - page about Canadian singer/actress needs clean up of formatting, implementation of sources, and some grammar. Tinton5 (talk) 16:34, 28 September 2014 (UTC)
Update: corrected some glaring grammatical errors and added two more wikilinks. ~sixtylamps(hold audience with) 13:10, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
Update: corrections made. Tinton5 (talk) 19:41, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: Bare URL fixed, external link fixed. Kobuu (talk) 14:35, 25 September 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Bare URLs fixed. Redlinks removed, dead links removed. Kobuu (talk) 14:30, 25 September 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Bare URLs fixed. Kobuu (talk) 18:10, 16 September 2014 (UTC)
Update: Fixed all but two Bare URLs for now. Will tackle the other two when I get home. Kobuu (talk) 17:47, 16 September 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Looks like someone else got to the last of the bare URLs. Kobuu (talk) 18:25, 1 November 2014 (UTC)
  • Grace Min In need of a thorough general clean-up; numerous links direct to pages which do not exist or are incorrectly linked. Also needs more references. --Dalek194 (talk) 20:03, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Majorly cleaned this one up. Still needs sources but the sections make a lot more sense now. Removed all the redlinks and improved some of the wikilinks. Any Tennis buffs wanting to add sources/content should do so! Kobuu (talk) 14:34, 15 September 2014 (UTC)
What do you mean by incorrectly edited? Something besides the sentence as paragraph style? It looks like someone edited the section to remove the marketing style of writing and it seems OK to me now. Koijmonop (talk) 01:00, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: Kobuu (talk) 17:56, 25 January 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: Kobuu (talk) 18:23, 25 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Avono (talk) 13:28, 19 November 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Kobuu (talk) 20:11, 25 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Seems to have been fixed by ShapLisa - please correct if I've got it wrong. GoldenRing (talk) 05:42, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Ohio State University - Bare urls. NorthAmerica1000 00:38, 4 October 2014 (UTC) Looks like the bare URLs have already been fixed.
  • John Myrdhin Reynolds - BLP article relying on a single self-published source with no citations - only a single link to a bio on the subject's own website. Chris Fynn (talk) 08:48, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Added necessary references. Quick Google search suggest that the subject is notable and has coverage in reliable sources. A.Minkowiski _Lets t@lk 12:12, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Jeff Kopas - Needs third party verification to reduce any promotional tone. User:Sapok 9 December 2014
 Fixed: The sources are clear and notable, the present article is not in promotional tone. A.Minkowiski _Lets t@lk 12:15, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Tourism in Romania – Needs copy editing to reduce promotional tone, for organization and cohesion, and more sources to verify content.NorthAmerica1000 20:44, 9 December 2014 (UTC)
 Fixed: Done. A.Minkowiski _Lets t@lk 12:46, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
Update: I have removed some dead links, copyvio and promotional content. Looks pretty good now A.Minkowiski _Lets t@lk 16:31, 25 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Struck Smart lighting; cleanup has been completed. That said, the article still has potential for expansion. NORTH AMERICA1000 02:37, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
Update: Page has been cleaned up; however more sources need to be implemented. Tinton5 (talk) 19:44, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: Bare URLs taken care of. Tinton5 (talk) 03:00, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: Bare URLs fixed and references updated.Koijmonop (talk) 00:50, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed Ry's the Guy (talk|contribs) 09:11, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: Seems like this one is fixed up. Tinton5 (talk) 02:57, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: URLS are cleaned up, however, there are 2 dead links which are now marked. Page still needs some more footnotes. Tinton5 (talk) 02:56, 23 March 2015 (UTC)
Update: references have been fixed up. Tinton5 (talk) 21:36, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: Bare URLs are fixed. Tinton5 (talk) 23:51, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed: - A520 | Talk me away!/sign it! 12:08, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed bare URLs TheEditor867talk
 Fixed:, except for ref 16, which the Wayback Machine refused to cough up and provides no clue as to what it is through its URL. Due to this, I've slapped a {{dead link}} on it. A520 | Talk me away!/sign it! 15:13, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed A520 | Talk me away!/sign it! 22:12, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed All bare urls fixed. North America1000 03:55, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
Page has been cleaned up. Tinton5 (talk) 22:06, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed All bare urls fixed. Avgr8 (talk) 18:00, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed up. Tinton5 (talk) 20:20, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed the bare urls by using Reflinks. But I found 2 deadlinks. Ayub407talk 06:54, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
Already fixed.
 Fixed by User:Megalibrarygirl. Rambunctious Racoon (talk) 08:28, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Fixed a bunch of bare urls; lots more to do. Leschnei (talk) 02:35, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed, Leschnei (talk) 13:31, 17 April 2016 (UTC).
 Fixed by me; only 2 bare URLs remain, however they are deadlinks, and their title cannot be ascertained. Rambunctious Racoon (talk) 08:19, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
Already fixed.
  • Faith Salie - multiple issues of which i can't get head or tails of it in the form of "Script error: The module returned a value. It is supposed to return an export table." --Doppelback (talk) 04:29, 28 August 2015 (UTC)
No script errors are presently occurring on the page. I also fixed a bare url. North America1000 23:13, 5 September 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed by User:StressOverStrain. North America1000 21:52, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed by Magioladitis on 17 December 2015. Ayub407talk 07:11, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Replaced sources entirely as they were inappropriate. Article now has multiple independent sources, cited properly; I also took care of an NPOV issue. Should I strike out the text above? I'm new here. (That'll teach me to skim.) —GrammarFascist (talk) 06:05, 12 September 2015 (UTC) / GrammarFascist (talk) 07:52, 12 September 2015 (UTC)
Already fixed.
  • Done but I found two dead links. Ayub407talk 13:11, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
 Fixed North America1000 16:01, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
  • References and Reflist added  Fixed. GuyBanks
Already fixed.
I didn't find any bare urls; must already be fixed.
  • Choson Exchange – Many bare urls intermingled with text in references. North America1000 05:19, 13 March 2016 (UTC) Bare urls already removed.
  • &pizza – Many bare urls in the following type of format: [1]. North America1000 20:16, 4 March 2016 (UTC) Fixed the problem links.
  • Kipper - Possible vandalism under the "colouring" section. The vandalism has been unnoticed and layered by layered. Qwertyxp2000 (talk | contribs) 08:01, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
But I am not sure. Maybe let's discuss this. Qwertyxp2000 (talk | contribs) 08:03, 2 March 2016 (UTC)
Oops, I realised this was a legitimate quote. Qwertyxp2000 (talk | contribs) 06:15, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
  • Fixed the bare links, but still an orphan. Leschnei (talk) 14:01, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
  • One Earth Designs – Many bare urls intermingled in references. North America1000 00:10, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
Fixed bare URLs.
I've  Fixed the bare URLs, but it's written like an advertisement, so I've tagged it with {{advert}}. A520 | Talk me away!/sign it! 15:02, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
  • AmazHS - Clean up needed after vandalization by anonymous IP users (Now protected). Dat GuyWiki (talk) 18:17, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
Doesn't seem to be any now. Ramthecowy (talk) 17:36, 16 January 2016 (UTC)
  • This section is in need of more material to be a proper part of the article. At this moment, it only contains broken formatting and information about the minimum ages to join the military and its manpower.Spartan - 117 (talk) 11:43, 23 November 2015 (UTC)
  • The section does not appear to have any formatting problems at this time. North America1000 16:18, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Update: I started work on this. Removed a couple issue tags, cleaned up the lead, added a source. Needs a little more work though. Kobuu (talk) 20:00, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
Doesn't appear to need cleanup at this time. North America1000 16:20, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Body memory - only sources confirming one POV have been chosen. What's the best cleanup template for that problem? --Karinpower (talk) 05:04, 28 April 2015 (UTC)
  • Hi Karinpower – the {{POV}} template would work, whereby you can place it in the section of the article where the sources are disputed (using {{POVsection|date=April 2015}}, or atop the article using {{POV|date=April 2015}}), and then provide your rationale on the article's talk page. North America1000 05:37, 28 April 2015 (UTC)
Thanks! I have done this. I haven't heard any feedback whatsoever; strange because previous talk shows a lot of contention on this page.--Karinpower (talk) 23:15, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
The article does not need general cleanup at this time. North America1000 16:22, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Naya Waters – Bare urls in external links section, tagged as promotional and needing more sources. North America1000 17:41, 3 June 2015 (UTC)
Tried my best, rewritten in NPOV, copy-pasted, corrected spelling and more, just needs some more content and better references. Ramthecowy (talk) 12:37, 17 January 2016 (UTC)
I'm going to archive this...the article has been cleaned up per what this project typically covers. North America1000 16:29, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
No bare urls at this time. North America1000 16:53, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Has essentially been cleaned up along the way. North America1000 16:54, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Lead and more content were added. North America1000 16:56, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Cavins Milkshake – Copy editing, bare urls. North America1000 04:52, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
No major issues now. North America1000 16:59, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Seems all right at this time. North America1000 17:04, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Bare urls were fixed by another user. North America1000 17:05, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Bibliography of the Tonga people (Africa) – A long list that has no links to other articles in the list's body, and is orphaned. North America1000 14:02, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
Links were added. North America1000 17:07, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Now only has refimprove tag atop. North America1000 17:09, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Still has some tags, but has been cleaned up. North America1000 17:12, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Appears to be in decent shape at this time. North America1000 17:15, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
No tags at this time. North America1000 17:17, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Seems to be in decent shape at this time. North America1000 17:27, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
  • IOS upgrade refusal - needs to be written in neutral point of view. Information isn't factual. References are messy. - Georgij Michaliutin (talk) 14:07, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Article was deleted. North America1000 17:31, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed. North America1000 17:35, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
No bare urls at this time. North America1000 17:38, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Leschnei (talk) 22:22, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
Removed the last bare url.  Fixed Leschnei (talk) 22:22, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Leschnei (talk) 23:50, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Leschnei (talk) 01:43, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Leschnei (talk) 17:58, 17 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Leschnei (talk) 01:43, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
I moved an image and shortened some sections. It's a long article, so it has many sections. North America1000 02:41, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Leschnei (talk) 02:33, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
Only has one tag atop at this time (refimprove). North America1000 02:52, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed. North America1000 02:57, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Intellect Design – Several errors and bare urls in references. North America1000 14:58, 31 October 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed Ayub407talk 09:17, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed AlphaBetaGammaDeltaEpsilonZeta 11:27, 6 October 2016 (UTC)
 Fixed AlphaBetaGammaDeltaEpsilonZeta 11:27, 6 October 2016 (UTC)
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