User talk:Marcblondins

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Raydann was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Submission reads like a literary thesis/essay.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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❯❯❯ Raydann^(Talk) 12:04, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Marcblondins! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ❯❯❯ Raydann(Talk) 12:04, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Raydann,

I hope you are doing well. Thanks you for your contributions to Wikipedia, and for taking the time to review my submission "Seigneurie and Fief of Anneville". I unerstand that the original submission may have read like a literary thesis or essay. I have since reworked the article to present the information in the best encyclopedic manner. I have let only datas and verifiable informations

y I would be grateful if you could take a look at the revised article and provide any feedback you may have. Thanks for your attention to detail as I read on your page and your dedication to maintaining the quality of Wikipedia's content. Marcblondins (talk) 15:58, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

P.S: I didnt delete your comment on the top of the draft. I didnt know if I could. In any case I hope it doesnt create confusion. the text has been reworked a lot

Seigneurie and Fief of Anneville, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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– bradv 15:13, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your contributions to Seigneurie and Fief of Anneville. Unfortunately, it is not ready for publishing because it needs more sources to establish notability and in various citations the sources does not support the statements they accompany . Your article is now a draft where you can improve it undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 07:06, 16 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]