User talk:COF6160

Hello, COF6160, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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Hello, I'm Gnangarra. I noticed that you recently removed some content from Fremantle without explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an edit summary. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks,

Hi I;ve again reverted your edit to the lead section of Fremantle, I recognise what you are trying to do but it falls outside of our guidelines. In particular Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section will help you on how to edit the lead. With the specifics of the lead population is for the area that is defined as Fremantle not for the area of the City of Fremantle, there is article on the City of Fremantle where such information is added. Also all facts need to be supported by a reference for population figures we use the ABS figures. With wording WP:WEASEL and WP:PEACOCK are something that your editing style needs to be consistant with, I suggest that you look at WP:USERNAME and WP:COI as these can seen probelmatic when new editors appear with the style of writing your using. Thx Gnangarra 07:19, 6 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Come and add yourself to Wikipedia:GLAM/Freopedia, if you like!  :-) Sam Wilson 02:32, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, the section simply read better before. Your edits contain excessive info, peacock terms and the tone isn't very encyclopedic. Check out WP:BETTER for writing tips, and featured articles provide a model to follow. HappyWaldo (talk) 09:27, 6 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]