User:Lilabroden3/Indian Hill Memorial Park/Sean.dempsey1231 Peer Review
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General info
- Whose work are you reviewing?
Lilabroden3
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- User:Lilabroden3/Indian Hill Memorial Park
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything in the article is relevant to the topic, however I wish there was more detail overall in the article on the topic. The article is neutral and only brings up historical relevant facts and information regarding Indian Hill Memorial Park. There aren't any viewpoints that I saw that were over or under represented in the article. The links in the article work, however they are almost all from the same source. I would have liked to see more variety of sources for this topic. The sources are neutral, work and give necessary background information for the points made in the article.