Template:Did you know nominations/Sefine Shipyard

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:15, 7 October 2021 (UTC)

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Sefine Shipyard

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  • ... that the Sefine Shipyard in Turkey built a hybrid-electric ferry for Norway, which is among the important representatives of environmentally friendly ships with zero emission? "Sefine Tersanesi'nin ürettiği elektrikli feribot Norveç sularında", "Yaklaşık 145 metre uzunluğunda Lityum ION bataryalı hibrit bir feribot olan Basto Electric NB42, sıfır emisyonlu çevre dostu gemilerin önemli temsilcileri arasında bulunuyor." (in Turkish) [1]

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:01, 18 August 2021 (UTC).

Article is long enough and new enough, but writing is inconsistent, and could do with a copy edit from a native English speaker. Foreign language citations will need a Turkish speaker to comment on suitability. OwainDavies (about)(talk) edited at 16:42, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
@CeeGee: update on the nomination? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 19:32, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
@Theleekycauldron: Copy editing is pending by the Guild of Copy Editors. CeeGee 11:31, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
@Owain.davies, CeeGee, and Theleekycauldron: I've taken a stab at copyediting the page, in a bid to get this nomination moving. It's not going to be as good as a Guild copyedit, but I hope it is acceptable for DYK. I can't comment on the sources, unfortunately. Sdrqaz (talk) 13:07, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
@Sdrqaz: it's not FA level prose, to be sure, but I think it's fine for DYK, and it's definitely a huge improvement. Nice work! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 10:33, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
Now, we haul User:Owain.davies back here to finish the review. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 10:34, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  • @Owain.davies: Copyediting of the article is now complete. Could you please continue with your review. Thank you and all, who contributed to improve it.. CeeGee 08:15, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Reviewer has been AWOL since early September, I'll take the review.
General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - I'd cut the second part of the hook, and just leave it at "ferry for Norway"
QPQ: Done.

Overall: AGF on Turkish sources. Hook needs some work, and I can't run an Earwig at the moment. We're almost there! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 16:28, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

  • @Theleekycauldron: Thank you for taking over the review. As you said you can not run the "Earwig's" I did it for you: [2]. Please take a look at that. If you give a hint what the issue is with the hook, I may be reword it.
  • I don't think the stuff after the first comma is necessary detail? It could be the loss of too much detail, but I think the punchiness outweighs the need to explain. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 00:58, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
  • If you think this is better: CeeGee 08:32, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
  • ALT1 ... that the Sefine Shipyard in Turkey built a hybrid-electric ferry for Norway?
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