Talk:Weesperplein metro station

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 20:54, 9 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Links

Prose

Lede

• I feel like we should link to Metro station in the first instance, rther than Austrian Metro. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Österreich? You mean Amsterdam Metro? Done. :)

• We don't generally link to large landmasses, (in this case Netherlands)/ Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Removed overlink.

• Asbestos was found during a renovation in 2011 - this is quite a short sentence. Probably needs expanding or removing from the lede. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Replaced asbestos with something else.

• The station was renovated again during 2017 and 2018. A new elevator and two new - lots of new's. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Replaced second new with additional.

• was used as a fallout shelter - when was it used as a fallout shelter? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pretty much since the cancellation of the line in 1975 (now added) until 1999 (already in the next sentence).

General

• Why is one image on the left? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Do you want more or less images on the left?

I can't say I care, but either all to the right, or alternate. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:19, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• You probably don't need to give times for the YouTube clip, unless you give time range. A start time on it's own is pointless. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added as a range.

• In April 2017, the Gemeente Vervoerbedrijf (GVB) - you don't actually use this acronym again in the article, so there's no need to explain it. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Removed in both prose and infobox.

• (Dutch: Amsterdam, aannemer en arbeider) - the bolding is not suitable here. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Removed bold. I decided to add it because the shape was an A due to all three groups starting with that letter in Dutch.

• EL should just be "Official website" Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done.

• Can we have some alt text? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Added alt texts on all.

There is still no alt text for the lede image. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:21, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Otherwise I am happy with this one. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:21, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:54, 9 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Lee Vilenski First round done. ~Styyx^Talk? 14:02, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]