Talk:Let Me Reintroduce Myself/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:31, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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This will run over the course of two days --K. Peake 09:31, 2 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

  • Infobox looks good!
  • "and the song's producer," → "and the sole producer,"
  • "to a new studio album" would it be more appropriate to write this or "to an upcoming studio album"?
  • Where is the older artist part sourced properly?
  • "and Stefani's brother" → "and Gwen's brother" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
  • Remove on the track after the instrumentation since this is implied
  • "A departure from Stefani's" → "A departure from Gwen Stefani's" because she was not the last Stefani mentioned
  • The one lyric and artwork sentence is not notable for the lead
  • "and comparing it favorably to" → "and making favorable comparisons to"
  • These three paragraphs are too small on their own, so merge the lead into two paras
  • "An accompanying music video to the song was" → "An accompanying music video was" with the wikilink
  • Remove the introduction to Philip Andelman since this is not required in the lead
  • "at a music video shoot." → "at a video shoot." to avoid using the term music video twice
  • "of the song's digital release," → "of the digital release,"

Background and release

  • Stefani doubting if her fans would do the same does not seem to be the point she is making in the quote
  • The source does not say that it was a Zoom conference where they met virtually
  • Pipe The Voice to The Voice (American TV series)
  • Either pipe Me Too movement to MeToo Movement or stylize it as that instead
  • "and described it her "a way of saying I’m" → "and described it as "a way of saying I'm"
  • Img looks good!
  • Wikilink music video
  • "also drew a comparison to her "Hollaback Girl" look," → "also drew a comparison to "Hollaback Girl"," since you have already specified this is about the style
  • "It serves as her first non-festive single release" → "It served as Stefani's first non-festive single"
  • Remove comma after third studio album
  • "after the announcement of her engagement to" → "after her engagement to" because no announcement is mentioned by the source
  • Wikilink lyric video to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Remove usage of "the" before Universal Music Group since that's not how it is stylized

Composition and lyrics

  • Img looks good!
  • The country part is not sourced, even though duets themselves are
  • Where is the Latin part sourced?
  • Wikilink as The Orange County Register instead
  • "said it was a" → "said it is a"
  • "claimed that the song helped" → "assured it helped"
  • "of Stefani’s days" → "of Stefani's days"
  • "Stefani's brother, Eric Stefani, contributes" → "Gwen's brother Eric Stefani contributes" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
  • "the song is about Stefani's" → "the song is about Gwen Stefani's" per above
  • "Ross wanted to help" → "Golan wanted to help"
  • "additionally references her 2005 single "Hollaback Girl"" → "additionally references "Hollaback Girl"" since it has already been introduced
  • "in the lyric:" → "with the lines"

Critical reception

  • "and compared it to "her days" → "and compared it to Stefani's "days"
  • ""Although it’s been a" → ""Although it's been a"
  • "Paper likened the song" → "The staff of Paper likened the song"
  • "at the right time."" → "at the right time"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • Italicise Vulture.com and wikilink to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • "to be clunky but overall" → "to be clunky, but overall"

Chart performance

  • "In the US," → "In the United States,"
  • "at number 3." → "at number three." per MOS:NUM
  • "It later reached at peak" → "The song later reached at peak"
  • Remove the ranking of the UK Singles Chart since that is not notable here
  • "It debuted at" → "The song debuted at"
  • Mention a couple or so more European airplay or digital charts per the lead

Music video

  • Wikilink music video on the img text
  • "The accompanying music video for "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" was" → "The accompanying music video was"
  • "released on January 1, 2021 to Stefani's YouTube channel." → "released to Stefani's YouTube channel on January 1, 2021."
  • Pipe Today to Today (American TV program)
  • "The video for "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" begins with" → "The video begins with"
  • Remove the comma after solo music video
  • "The "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" video then transitions" → "The scene then transitions"
  • Remove the comma after debut studio solo album
  • Remove pipe on Zoom
  • "of the song itself" and called it" → "of the song itself", and called it"
  • Wikilink Entertainment Tonight

Live performances

  • "on December 7, 2020 for a" → "on December 7, 2020, for a"
  • Remove pipe on Today
  • "Her performance on The Tonight Show was also" → "The third performance was also"

Track listing

  • Good

Credits and personnel

  • Good

Charts

Release history

  • Good

References

External links

  • Good

Final comments and verdict

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; I would have posted my initial comments yesterday, but I did not have the time. --K. Peake 11:07, 3 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the review! I will be getting to this shortly. Carbrera (talk) 23:15, 4 January 2023 (UTC).[reply]
  • ✗ Fail for this one due to the nominator's lack of activity. --K. Peake 07:04, 2 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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