Talk:Jalin Hyatt

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:12, 16 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:13, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:13, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • The lead should be expanded. Easily a third of the article is in the "Early life and high school career" section, yet there is really nothing in the lead about that section. Even just mentioning where he played high school ball would be better.
    • Added a sentence about high school.
  • Infobox looks good, but just add alt text "Photo of Hyatt in high school wearing his helmet on a football field" or something similar would suffice.
    • Done

Early life and high school career

  • and Eneveylan Hyatt who, commas after "and" and "Hyatt"
    • Done
  • Hyatt would help Dutch Fork go undefeated and win state championships in 2018 and 2019, catching 3 touchdowns, including the overtime game winner in the 2019 state championship game, recommend splitting into two sentences after "2019"
    • Done
  • in state, typically has a dash in it
    • Done
  • Despite his success in high school, Hyatt was not recruited by in state programs Clemson and South Carolina due to their concerns of his small frame as he weighed only 153 pounds (69.3 kg) at the time, with South Carolina head coach Will Muschamp telling him "Man, you're fast, but you need to eat more peanut butter"., consider splitting into two sentences.
  • Done
  • then head coach, just delete "then"
    • Done

College career

  • is located mere miles from his childhood home, recommend "located just a few miles"
    • Done

Professional career

  • He has signed his contract. Article and section need to be updated.[1]
    • Updated

Images

  • Licensing looks good on the one photo, no concerns.

References

  • Be consistent with the website field. Either choose the exact website or the title of the website (i.e. either "yahoo.com" or "Yahoo"). It seems to be about 50/50 in article right now.
    • Changed all of the references to title of website except for the AL.com reference as that is the official title of website and the publication
  • Ref 61 needs an access-date
    • Done
  • Ref 43 should just be WATE or wate.com
    • Done
  • Ref 56 is a dead link
    • Replaced link
  • Consider running the archive bot on the article [2]
  • Did a few spot checks, everything looks good.

Overall, really nice work. Putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:13, 15 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007 I believe I have addressed everything. Newtothisedit (talk) 01:51, 16 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Nice work, passed! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:13, 16 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:11, 4 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Hyatt in high school
Hyatt in high school

Improved to Good Article status by Newtothisedit (talk). Self-nominated at 18:32, 16 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jalin Hyatt; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Newtothisedit: Good article. Though, Earwig is reporting a very high copyvio issue and i'd like to know why. Onegreatjoke (talk) 20:51, 16 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

    • @Onegreatjoke: I believe that the high CopyVio score is from this link which is an almost exact copy of the college career section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Newtothisedit (talk • contribs) 21:29, 16 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      • Repinging Onegreatjoke because ping's don't go through without a sig being included on the edit with the ping. Hoping this review can be concluded soon. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:19, 1 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
        • I am supportive of an approve on this nom. Since they seem to have missed the last ping a week and a half ago, @Onegreatjoke: hey! A bit of déjà vu, as I think I did the same thing to one of Onegreatjoke's noms recently. ~ Pbritti (talk) 20:22, 10 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Newtothisedit: thought i commented already. Anyways. while it's a copy of that link. I need to you answer about whether you copied the source or if it's a case of WP:MIRROR. Onegreatjoke (talk) 22:12, 10 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Onegreatjoke: Yes it is a mirror.
If we are to assume that this is a mirror then sure. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:34, 13 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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