Talk:Dvorichna settlement hromada

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miguelsa12 (talk · contribs) 19:22, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I'm planning to review this article. Best regards, Miguel (talk) 19:22, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

First review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


I think this article meets all the criteria below. Congratulations!

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    Review passed.

--Miguel (talk) 19:42, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Miguelsa12: Wow, thank you so much for reviewing! Was there really nothing that needed to be changed about the article, not even grammar, to make it GA? If so, that's a first for me 🙂 Cheers! Johnson524 01:50, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Johnson524: I don't think grammar (or prose in general) has to be changed. The article covers the main aspects of the proposed topic (an administrative division in Ukraine), all the info is referenced with reliable sources in accordance to the MOS, etcetera. If you want, you may investigate and add more info to upgrade it to Featured Article. Best regards, Miguel (talk) 17:36, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Miguelsa12: I think I am going to hold off on looking at Featured Status as long as the war is ongoing here, but I do appreciate the encouragement 😁 Thank you again for reviewing, cheers! Johnson524 18:08, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 18:42, 21 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that the Dvorichna settlement hromada has remained divided in half between Russia and Ukraine since the 2022 Kharkiv counteroffensive? Source: https://suspilne.media/459449-mabut-povertatisa-bude-nikudi-ak-zive-dvoricanska-gromada-harkivsini-polovina-akoi-zalisaetsa-pid-okupacieu/
    • ALT1: ... that the head of the Dvorichna settlement hromada would be imprisoned twice by Russian forces for refusing to cooperate after the hromada was fully occupied during the Russian invasion of Ukraine? Source: https://kupiansk.city/articles/263624/-v-dvorichanskij-stg-nespokijno-50-naselenih-punktiv-zalishayutsya-v-okupacii-foto
    • Reviewed: [[]]

Improved to Good Article status by Johnson524 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:11, 30 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Dvorichna settlement hromada; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: @Johnson524: Good article. Onegreatjoke (talk) 03:02, 1 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Language improvement requires factual source regarding quality of land

The English text states: "The entire hromada is composed largely of flat, agricultural land, with virtually no industrial areas."

"Entire" and "largely" are conflicting adjectives. Better alternatives could be: "The hromada is largely composed of flat, agricultural ..." or "The entire hromada is composed of largely flat agricultural ..." but I don't know, factually, which would be more accurate. Al Begamut (talk) 04:20, 28 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Al Begamut:  Option 1 Done. Thanks for the suggestion, cheers! Johnson524 12:15, 28 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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