Talk:Dustin Wolf/GA1

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 20:21, 23 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this shortly. Please note that while I am ranked 10th in edits to this article, they were two minor edits in 2021. Therefore, I am still eligible/allowed to review this article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:21, 23 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Hickory, it's been about a week since the last update, just making sure you didn't have any holdups with any previously mentioned fixes before we can continue the review.

Cheers, IceBergYYC (talk) 18:09, 1 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

• Per WP:LEAD, citations aren't common in leads except for controversial/disputed info. I think the following are okay to keep citations but I don't think the rest are really debatable/controversial: he is considered significantly undersized for a goaltender and is currently considered one of the top NHL goaltending prospects and The Hockey Writers ranking him as the number one prospect.  Done

Early life

• I find the wording of the first sentence a bit awkward. Could it possibly be re-worded to: Wolf was born on April 16, 2001, in Gilroy, California, as the only child to parents Mike and Michelle Wolf. Done
• Also, I recommend moving the Elite Prospects reference to the comma after California as that is the only thing that reference verifies. The second reference could stay at the end  Done
• Do we have any information about his time with the Los Angeles Junior Kings? I know 104th overall isn't particularly impressive but he must've caught the eye of some scouts to even be drafted. Done
• I recommend archiving all of these links in case something happens (see Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ice Hockey/Archive82#New NHL.com development if you want to see what happens when links aren't archived). You can archive these links easily here  Done (Thanks for the tool link, appreciated, I ran into this issue with all the Major-Junior league links while researching this and Mitch Love.)

Playing career

• ...in the Conference Semi-finals of the 2018 WHL playoffs, Carter Hart.... You can remove Carter since you already mentioned his first name earlier.  Done
• I think you can merge the 2019 playoffs with the first paragraph. I totally get it if you don't want to but to me it makes the page seem too sparse and like there's not a lot of info. By merged I just mean added to the end, not removing info. Done
  • You can also do the same thing with the paragraph about the 2019–20 season and Del Wilson Trophy  Done
  • The information you added to his contract paragraph is really interesting but I think it can also be merged with the one below it. Not done If you're adamant I can change it, but as it's more talking about the offseason, rather than the 2019-20 season, I'd rather keep it seperate.
• posting the highest save percentage (SV%) and goals against average (GAA). I recommend moving the abbreviations to During his WHL bantam-draft year, Wolf posted a 2.99 goals against average (GAA) and .905 save percentage through seven games with the Junior Kings' bantam AAA team since this is the first mention  Done
• Seeing as you only have two sentences about the 2019–20 season, I feel like you could add more to it. Maybe include "goalie of the month" [1]  Done (I may add some more here in a little bit, just doing a bit more research.)
• I absolutely love how you got the jumping photo!  Thank you very much! I'm not a photographer (clearly) but I knew that photo would be good here.
• Wolf began the 2020–21 season with the Stockton Heat, making his professional debut on February 21, 2021, a 7–1 loss to the Toronto Marlies. But the season started on February 5. Why did it take that long?  Not done that was the Heat's first game of the season. COVID schedule and whatnot [2]
• Wolf had a standout rookie season - we don't see anything else about this except for his end of season stats. Is there anything else interesting?  Done
• Do we have anything for the current season? I know it's early so it's okay if you don't but how did he do at camp? Why was he sent back?  Doneish, too early to put too much for this season.

International play

• Please remove the abbreviation for GAA since you've mentioned it above  Done

Pass

• Thanks for your patience IceBergYYC. I am passing this article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:01, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  Thank you very much, always appreciate the help in making this article as good as possible. Cheers, IceBergYYC (talk) 03:07, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]