Talk:Bramble Cay melomys/GA1
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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 11:39, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
Reading now! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 11:39, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
- is an extinct species of rodent – I would add "recently", and link directly to List of recently extinct mammals.
- please link family, subfamily, endemic, anthropogenic climate change
- maybe worth adding "Australia" to the lead (or is the island part of Papua New Guinea)?
- and Joseph Jukes collected a holotype. – Holotypes are important for extinct animals. I would add where the holotype is stored now (British Museum of Natural History).
- The first paragraph of the "Distribution and ecology" does not fit under this section. To be consistent with other biology articles, I would have it under "Taxonomy" as the first section of the article.
- 11 species of plants have been recorded on the islands; – more than one island? Why plural?
- the common ones included – why past tense now? Before, the vegetation was described in present tense.
- That is all! Very good, highly interesting, yet sad article. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 12:24, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
- @Jens Lallensack: I think that's everything. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks! Passing now, congrats! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 17:25, 22 May 2019 (UTC)