User contributions for Jerry4dos
29 July 2023
- 14:4314:43, 29 July 2023 diff hist +1 m Los Angeles County Probation Department was -> were (change for better grammar)
22 May 2023
- 20:2720:27, 22 May 2023 diff hist +3 Ken Niles Avenue -> Boulevard Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 April 2023
- 02:1602:16, 13 April 2023 diff hist +3 m The Bamboo Prison "... agent posing a man disillusioned..." -> "...agent posing as a man disillusioned..."
11 March 2023
- 20:3020:30, 11 March 2023 diff hist +2 m Marmara Prison separate -> separately (change to adverb form)
10 March 2023
- 20:4920:49, 10 March 2023 diff hist 0 m Beverly Park (amusement park) "amount" -> "number" for better grammar. See: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/grammar/british-grammar/amount-of-number-of-or-quantity-of
28 February 2023
- 01:5401:54, 28 February 2023 diff hist −1 m William Demarest fix type "threes" -> "three"
12 February 2023
- 17:1917:19, 12 February 2023 diff hist −2 Dynamic pricing →Cost-plus pricing: skewered -> skewed Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
19 December 2022
- 16:4416:44, 19 December 2022 diff hist +3 m Bruce Weber (photographer) and one OF his closest collaborators Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 October 2022
- 23:2523:25, 15 October 2022 diff hist +4 m How the West Was Won (film) "known his Western film scores" -> "known for his Western film scores" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 October 2022
- 11:0711:07, 1 October 2022 diff hist −1 m Bruno Tesch Typo fix woujld used -> would use
25 July 2022
- 21:4821:48, 25 July 2022 diff hist +63 Talk:Forest Falls, California This page needs professional help. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 July 2022
- 20:5420:54, 18 July 2022 diff hist 0 Breast torture →Techniques: Fixed typo show or power -> show of power Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:5120:51, 18 July 2022 diff hist +1 Breast torture →Techniques: Fix typo clams -> clamps Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 June 2022
- 20:3920:39, 30 June 2022 diff hist 0 m Budweiser trademark dispute fix typo behinning -> beginning
1 August 2020
- 22:0222:02, 1 August 2020 diff hist −3 Coco Chanel →Activity as Nazi agent: Reworked awkward sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 May 2020
- 23:0123:01, 13 May 2020 diff hist 0 Cincinnati Subway →Proposed route: description from 1916 bond campaign[1]: Fix typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 May 2020
- 07:0007:00, 6 May 2020 diff hist +3 Keith Andes →RKO and Universal: Correct punctuation, correct actual title of movie Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 March 2020
- 22:2522:25, 18 March 2020 diff hist +3 KLAA (AM) added missing word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:1022:10, 18 March 2020 diff hist −1 m Bonneville International →History: typo
7 July 2019
- 01:1501:15, 7 July 2019 diff hist 0 m Ridgecrest, California →1995 Ridgecrest earthquake
17 July 2018
- 04:0804:08, 17 July 2018 diff hist 0 Cellebrite →History: Fixed capitalization. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 July 2018
- 04:3304:33, 9 July 2018 diff hist −2 m SlimFast →Effectiveness: Clean up the spacing.
9 January 2018
- 18:4618:46, 9 January 2018 diff hist +445 Wikipedia:Editor assistance/Requests →Film base: new section
9 April 2017
- 02:2802:28, 9 April 2017 diff hist −1 Sacagawea →The Lewis and Clark expedition: Standardize printing conventions of commas and periods within closing quotation marks. This article contained a mixture of American English styling (sample.") and British English styling (sample".) According to Wiki... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0902:09, 9 April 2017 diff hist 0 Heracleum mantegazzianum →In popular culture: More punctuation fixes. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0702:07, 9 April 2017 diff hist 0 Heracleum mantegazzianum →Countermeasures: Touch up punctuation: steroids". -> steroids." (to match conventional printing styles) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 April 2017
- 15:5115:51, 2 April 2017 diff hist −2 m Nocturnal penile tumescence grammar: "their" -> "his" (singular pronoun "his" to match singular subject "patient")
13 March 2017
- 15:2015:20, 13 March 2017 diff hist +2 LeRoy Prinz →Career: Conformed name style of Agnes de Mille. ("deMille" -> "de Mille") See the discussion of Agnes's spelling here: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cecil_B._DeMille Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 March 2017
- 03:5303:53, 6 March 2017 diff hist −2 Dollar Tree →2000s: Fixed grammar: "their website" -> "its website" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:4903:49, 6 March 2017 diff hist +2 Dollar Tree Fixed grammar: "it is member company" -> "it is a member company" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 February 2017
- 21:5021:50, 9 February 2017 diff hist 0 m Ellis Act ellis -> Ellis
4 December 2016
- 03:4803:48, 4 December 2016 diff hist +22 Lake Arrowhead, California →Geography: added new content "date of reopening" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 November 2016
- 02:5902:59, 20 November 2016 diff hist −2 St. Francis Dam →Dam safety legislation: grammar fix "their" -> "its" singular subject ("municipality") requires singular possessive pronoun ("its") Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 August 2016
- 19:1519:15, 7 August 2016 diff hist 0 m List of Foucault pendulums →United States: Rearrange table (Wheaton was stuck in the list as a "state" following "Illinois" rather than within the listings for "Illinois"
27 June 2016
- 23:4623:46, 27 June 2016 diff hist +109 List of Foucault pendulums →United States: MSI has two pendula -- I'll try to get the details on the second one when I visit in August
25 April 2016
- 17:2917:29, 25 April 2016 diff hist −2 m Sticky-shed syndrome grammar fix "their" -> "his" (singular to agree with singular antecedant "each"
18 April 2016
- 16:1516:15, 18 April 2016 diff hist −2 m San Francisco Transbay Terminal →Bridge Railway: for better grammar "there" -> "its"
14 April 2016
- 01:3401:34, 14 April 2016 diff hist +2 m Arrowhead Water →Water sources: add comma "SpringHimalyas" -> "Spring, Himalyas"
- 01:2901:29, 14 April 2016 diff hist +2 m Arrowhead Water →Discovery: grammar fix "in" -> "into"
9 April 2016
- 03:2203:22, 9 April 2016 diff hist −1 Orson Bean →Filmography: correct typo ("Throwbridge" changes to "Trowbridge") Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 March 2016
- 04:4404:44, 7 March 2016 diff hist −73 Azusa, California →Transportation: Updated to reflect opening of new train line service
8 February 2016
- 04:0004:00, 8 February 2016 diff hist +4 m Sixth Street Viaduct →Demolition and replacement: Rewrite sentence for more grammatical cohesion.
27 January 2016
- 06:4306:43, 27 January 2016 diff hist 0 m Los Angeles Aqueduct →Construction: Add "Fred" to first reference to "Eaton," removed "Fred" from second reference.
25 January 2016
- 17:1817:18, 25 January 2016 diff hist −1 m Auto Train →Operations: Change "an" to "a"
23 January 2016
- 14:3614:36, 23 January 2016 diff hist 0 Tesch & Stabenow Change "absorbents" to "adsorbents". See discussions here:
1 September 2015
- 16:5216:52, 1 September 2015 diff hist +1 m Frank Stanton (executive) →Color television: Change "a" to "an" for better grammar.
13 July 2015
- 15:2315:23, 13 July 2015 diff hist −8 m CBS Studios Fix the grammar (yikes!)
- 15:0615:06, 13 July 2015 diff hist 0 m RKO Pictures correct typo "Musac" -> "Muzak" (Musac is a museum; if the author really means "the elevator music company, he wants "Muzak"))
22 June 2015
- 18:0818:08, 22 June 2015 diff hist +66 Forest Lawn Memorial Park (Long Beach) Changed "only two" to eight to conform to Wikipedia's own list
21 June 2015
- 22:2022:20, 21 June 2015 diff hist +20 List of Foucault pendulums You're probably not going to like this EDIT because it involves ORIGINAL RESEARCH. The Foucault Pendulum at the Santa Barbara Museum of Natural History has been partially dismantled. Only the "pit" remains visible. I traveled from Los Angeles yesterday
