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18:4518:45, 7 September 2019 diff hist −284‎ Danone ‎ →‎Controversies: since this succinct summary is already in our lead, we don't need it at the end of this section

03:4603:46, 6 September 2019 diff hist −3‎ System accident ‎No edit summary
03:4503:45, 6 September 2019 diff hist +6‎ System accident ‎No edit summary
03:4203:42, 6 September 2019 diff hist −10‎ System accident ‎ dating Langewiesche's article "The Lessons of Valujet 592" as the late 1990s
03:2803:28, 6 September 2019 diff hist −193‎ Danone ‎ combining two references to same news article

17:3517:35, 3 September 2019 diff hist 0‎ Danone ‎ changing our lead to less logical but more conventional method in which references come after commas and periods.
17:1317:13, 3 September 2019 diff hist +1‎ Danone ‎No edit summary
16:4616:46, 3 September 2019 diff hist +387‎ Danone ‎ in keeping with our goal of not being written like an advertisement, adding acknowledgement in lead that there has been criticism of marketing practices of infant formula (distinct from quality of formula itself), with fuller explanations remaining in Controversies section.
16:2116:21, 3 September 2019 diff hist +50‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: giving name to reference

17:3717:37, 30 August 2019 diff hist +195‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: explanatory footnote, Danone's response that Docplexus is online platform for doctors only, no consumers have access, and thus it is not a violation of 2003 IMS Act.
17:2917:29, 30 August 2019 diff hist +87‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: making it clear that in addition to Danone, Nestle, Abbott, and Mead Johnson have also been accused of illegal marketing and promotion
17:2317:23, 30 August 2019 diff hist +5‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: fixing link
17:2017:20, 30 August 2019 diff hist −1‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: rewrite
17:1517:15, 30 August 2019 diff hist −6‎ Danone ‎ →‎India
17:1117:11, 30 August 2019 diff hist +911‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: from India Times, the criticism that in spite of Indian law prohibiting monetary benefits to doctors, Danone sponsors such things as nutritional conferences and web platforms
16:3916:39, 30 August 2019 diff hist +5‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: rewrite
16:3516:35, 30 August 2019 diff hist +64‎ System accident ‎ giving Charles Perrow credit for first developing these ideas, and referring to his 1984 book as mid-1980s
16:3216:32, 30 August 2019 diff hist −9‎ System accident ‎ rewrite

17:3317:33, 20 August 2019 diff hist +241‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: adding to reference a description of Danone's "Green Book," which is its code of conduct.
17:1617:16, 20 August 2019 diff hist +8‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: rewriting comment in parentheses as full sentence
17:0517:05, 20 August 2019 diff hist +116‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: yes, Nutricia ordered external audit, but critics contend Nutricia directed course of said audit and scheduled audit away from handover period from previous owner Wockhardt.
16:3416:34, 20 August 2019 diff hist +10‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: after introductory sentence, let's use name of subsidiary Nutricia India (or shorter form of simply Nutricia)
16:2016:20, 20 August 2019 diff hist +107‎ Danone ‎ →‎India: adding approx. time of Wockhardt purchase (early in decade of 2010s), and that purchase gave Danone entry to India's infant nutrition market.
15:4015:40, 20 August 2019 diff hist +692‎ Danone ‎ →‎Controversies: adding India subsection starting with 2014 article from DairyReporter

01:4501:45, 16 August 2019 diff hist +165‎ Danone ‎ →‎Indonesia subsidiary: adding quote from Indonesian pediatrician
01:4101:41, 16 August 2019 diff hist +390‎ Danone ‎ →‎Indonesia subsidiary: two potential harms in promoting infant formula in poorer areas: lack of dependable access to clean water, and ongoing cost of product such significant part of family budget that parents highly motivated to attempt to stretch product, with risk of malnourishment to infant or child.

19:0219:02, 15 August 2019 diff hist 0‎ Danone ‎ →‎Indonesia subsidiary: footnote applies to whole paragraph, not merely first sentence
18:5018:50, 15 August 2019 diff hist +402‎ Danone ‎ →‎Indonesia subsidiary: per this Feb. 2013 article in The Guardian, Sari Husada had (or has) broader sponsorship within the Indonesian medical system than merely providing merchandise to midwives for promoting infant formula.
18:1518:15, 15 August 2019 diff hist +49‎ System accident ‎ William Langewiesche is summarizing the views of Charles Perrow
18:0218:02, 15 August 2019 diff hist +6‎ System accident ‎No edit summary
18:0018:00, 15 August 2019 diff hist −15‎ System accident ‎ rewrite

17:3517:35, 4 June 2019 diff hist +246‎ System accident ‎ adding additional William Langewiesche quote in which he writes about " . . unworkable chains of command, unlearnable training programs . . "
17:2317:23, 4 June 2019 diff hist +17‎ System accident ‎ employees are likely to be blamed for "problems," which are often simply changes in the business environment or the tech environment
17:1817:18, 4 June 2019 diff hist +6‎ System accident ‎ easier read
17:1517:15, 4 June 2019 diff hist −4‎ System accident ‎ quicker read of quote
17:1317:13, 4 June 2019 diff hist −5‎ System accident ‎ rewrite

15:5015:50, 30 May 2019 diff hist +10‎ System accident ‎ rewriting
15:4815:48, 30 May 2019 diff hist −137‎ System accident ‎ shortening later paragraph
15:2015:20, 30 May 2019 diff hist +644‎ System accident ‎ re-adding paragraph relegated to Talk page on April 24; just too good to leave out
15:1415:14, 30 May 2019 diff hist +175‎ Talk:System accident ‎ →‎demoting longish paragraph from lead
15:0815:08, 30 May 2019 diff hist −38‎ System accident ‎ going with one short paragraph at a particular point in reading, but not two
14:5814:58, 30 May 2019 diff hist −382‎ System accident ‎ shortening paragraph
14:4414:44, 30 May 2019 diff hist +8‎ System accident ‎ rewrite
14:3914:39, 30 May 2019 diff hist +1‎ System accident ‎ moving analogy of Rube Goldberg devices toward end of lead

16:0716:07, 23 May 2019 diff hist +27‎ System accident ‎ hopefully, greater sentence readability
15:4515:45, 23 May 2019 diff hist −176‎ System accident ‎ shortening paragraph
15:3115:31, 23 May 2019 diff hist +1‎ System accident ‎ changing to present tense of "Langewiesche writes"
15:2515:25, 23 May 2019 diff hist +18‎ System accident ‎ setting off opposing idea
15:2115:21, 23 May 2019 diff hist +361‎ System accident ‎ Adding to end of lead that "high reliability organization" is a concept which disagrees with that of system accident.

16:2616:26, 25 April 2019 diff hist −2‎ System accident ‎ this section in Langewiesche's article is entitled A "Normal Accident"

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