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2 February 2024

• 00:1000:10, 2 February 2024 diff hist −2‎ ALGOL ‎ →‎Further reading: Same as last, except Kruseman and Dijkstra citations.
• 00:0800:08, 2 February 2024 diff hist −6‎ ALGOL ‎ →‎Further reading: A couple of copyedits to the Goos entry in the Further reading.
• 00:0500:05, 2 February 2024 diff hist +198‎ ALGOL ‎ Combined various further reading sources into one place, and edited them stylistically, using {{cite book markup, to more similar formats.

1 February 2024

• 23:3223:32, 1 February 2024 diff hist +659‎ ALGOL ‎ Adding the first og the O'Hearn volumes to further reading, as they are thoroughly under-utilized.
• 20:3920:39, 1 February 2024 diff hist +1,281‎ ALGOL ‎ →‎ALGOL and programming language research: Finished annotating why the earlier citation of O'Hearn & Tennent's edited volume fails as a single source for this paragraph. In short, see markup, it's impossible to tell what came from whom (of the 20 authors writing in 10 chapters in this book).
• 19:3619:36, 1 February 2024 diff hist +53‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Dihydroxyamine ‎No edit summary
• 19:3419:34, 1 February 2024 diff hist +256‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Dihydroxyamine ‎No edit summary
• 19:1919:19, 1 February 2024 diff hist +31‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Dihydroxyamine ‎No edit summary
• 19:1519:15, 1 February 2024 diff hist +331‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Dihydroxyamine ‎ →‎Dihydroxyamine
• 19:0219:02, 1 February 2024 diff hist +762‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Dihydroxyamine ‎No edit summary
• 18:5418:54, 1 February 2024 diff hist +21‎ Talk:Sodium bromite ‎ →‎Merger proposal
• 18:4918:49, 1 February 2024 diff hist +2,681‎ User talk:Kimen8 ‎ →‎Citation practice.: new section Tags: Reverted New topic
• 18:2418:24, 1 February 2024 diff hist +688‎ User talk:Keresluna ‎ →‎I suggest...: new section Tag: New topic
• 18:1718:17, 1 February 2024 diff hist +110‎ Sodium bromite ‎ Proposing merger of an outside clearly related section into this article, proposal discussed in this article's Talk.
• 18:1418:14, 1 February 2024 diff hist +110‎ Bromous acid ‎ →‎Sodium bromite: Proposing section merger, proposal discussed at main article (SOdium bromite).
• 18:0118:01, 1 February 2024 diff hist +649‎ Talk:Sodium bromite ‎No edit summary
• 17:4617:46, 1 February 2024 diff hist +21‎ ALGOL ‎ →‎ALGOL and programming language research: Copy edit, in-text note.
• 17:4217:42, 1 February 2024 diff hist +702‎ ALGOL ‎ Our personal experiences/understandings aren't to be basis for WP content. I'm not a fan of tags, but less of unsourced content, or editor views presented as fact. WP:VERIFY applies to us, not just humanities, etc. This isn't sky-is-blue content—please find/add citations nearly supporting, and edit text to them, throughout! (Besides, recounting history of ALGOL is a humanities effort informed by technical understanding.) And when heaping praise, it better be stated, published praise of others.

30 January 2024

• 06:1506:15, 30 January 2024 diff hist +7‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ Hiding the Converts category until it can be reviewed—arguably a misapplication of the standard connotation of the term, which implies conversion from something, to something (and not the initial acceptance of a thing, at first), in this case of an adult's recounting their coming to faith as a child. In any case, the statement in question is unsourced as of this date.
• 06:0806:08, 30 January 2024 diff hist −10‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ Last corrective edit, just to be sure I leave things as St Anselm intended. Never wise to cross a Saint. Tag: Manual revert
• 06:0606:06, 30 January 2024 diff hist −4‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ Returning another St Anselm edit. Hope this corrects all. Tag: Reverted
• 06:0406:04, 30 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ Returning a lost St Anselm edit. Tag: Reverted
• 06:0306:03, 30 January 2024 diff hist +14‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ Fixed two red wikilink errors, and the soft hyphen issue (red markup warning in citations). Tag: Reverted
• 05:5905:59, 30 January 2024 diff hist +45‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ Putting access dates in for citation URLs visited today.
• 05:5705:57, 30 January 2024 diff hist +394‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ →‎Published works: Completed one published work entry.
• 05:5005:50, 30 January 2024 diff hist −158‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ →‎Personal life: Replacing in invalid citation. Tag: references removed
• 05:4705:47, 30 January 2024 diff hist +46‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ →‎Career: Noting permament dead links.
• 05:4405:44, 30 January 2024 diff hist +110‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ →‎Impact and legacy: Completed the Beeke citation. So could remove {{full}} tags.
• 05:3605:36, 30 January 2024 diff hist +495‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ →‎Career: Looking up URLs and completing references. Two done. (Also removes red error messages from the source list, as missing titles is a prevailing issue.) Tag: possible unreferenced addition to BLP
• 05:1705:17, 30 January 2024 diff hist +2,541‎ Michael Barrett (theologian) ‎ Created standard academic BLP sections, in part to allow separation and clarification of unsourced and sourced content. Converting sources to standard markup, and beginning to fill empty source fields. By far and away, most material in this article is either unsourced, or poorly sourced. Tags: possible unreferenced addition to BLP nowiki added references removed

27 January 2024

• 21:2421:24, 27 January 2024 diff hist +248‎ William Mitchell Ramsay ‎ →‎Published works: One further book citation completed.
• 21:1721:17, 27 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ William Mitchell Ramsay ‎ →‎Published works: Corrected a mistake in a date field.
• 21:1021:10, 27 January 2024 diff hist +21‎ William Mitchell Ramsay ‎ →‎Personal life: Made paragraph here open with Ramsay's name, and reordered the sentence to elevate the title subject content over more extraneous material.
• 21:0421:04, 27 January 2024 diff hist +1,314‎ William Mitchell Ramsay ‎ Formatted book citations appearing in the "Published works" section, using {{cite book... markup. Noted incomplete nature of most entries, and the need for citations for other attributed articles. Tag: references removed
• 17:3217:32, 27 January 2024 diff hist +564‎ William Mitchell Ramsay ‎ Added subsectioning to give structure to amorphous Career section. Moved text of misplaced section—its content similar to other in article, and does not justify a separate section. Moreover, it is half finished with regard to sourcing. So, that block was moved to a position with similar material, but the section heading was kept—because legacy is an important consideration for such an important historical scholar—until such time that material germane to the section heading can be placed.

23 January 2024

• 00:0700:07, 23 January 2024 diff hist +112‎ The 48 Laws of Power ‎ →‎Reception: Reorganized material separating popular, commercial reception from that of critics and scholars

22 January 2024

• 23:5823:58, 22 January 2024 diff hist +6‎ The 48 Laws of Power ‎ →‎Reception: Made a vague, self-promotional sentence specific, to avoid having to tag for the earlier weasel word-type of presentation.

21 January 2024

• 06:1006:10, 21 January 2024 diff hist +49‎ Zal Batmanglij ‎ →‎Career: Section containing significant non-"Sky is blue" content is marked as needing citations to allow verification, so it no longer violates WP:VERIFY.
• 06:0306:03, 21 January 2024 diff hist +31‎ Brit Marling ‎ Formally calling for an update. The citation for the 2023 series ("Murder...") was just added by us. Emphasis of the article (and sources) clusters around the period of 2011-2014. The period during and following the OA (through today) appears lean in comparison.
• 05:5905:59, 21 January 2024 diff hist +985‎ Brit Marling ‎ Citation added to support previously unsupported lead sentence. Otherwise, article needs an update based on sources. (Adding content just as editors become personally aware devolves into WP:OR, and violates WP:VERIFY.)
• 05:4805:48, 21 January 2024 diff hist +398‎ A Murder at the End of the World ‎ Article is generally superbly done, but noting some material in lead is unique, violating WP:INTRO, and same material is therefore unsourced. Also noting that clustering citations 1-4 at end of an internal paragraph is not helpful vis-a-vis WP:VERIFY. Citations should appear with content derived therefrom.

20 January 2024

• 21:4621:46, 20 January 2024 diff hist +234‎ Sex at Dawn ‎ →‎Scholarly reception: Made clear why the opening paragraph is unsourced, and called for a timestamp to complete the audio blog/interview citation. Reorderd the subsections that follow, because the emphasis of the opening summary is negative, and so the argument flows naturally into the negative reviews to open the article. NOTE: it is possible that the subsection headings might actually be removed. Purported positive reviews are not very much so–rather relatively descriptive, negative.