User contributions for 73.210.154.39

23 December 2015

• 01:3201:32, 23 December 2015 diff hist +63‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Respectfully suggest
• 00:5700:57, 23 December 2015 diff hist +344‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Respectfully suggest
• 00:4900:49, 23 December 2015 diff hist 0‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Respectfully suggest
• 00:4800:48, 23 December 2015 diff hist +18‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Respectfully suggest
• 00:4800:48, 23 December 2015 diff hist +166‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Respectfully suggest
• 00:4500:45, 23 December 2015 diff hist +6‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Respectfully suggest
• 00:4400:44, 23 December 2015 diff hist +261‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎Respectfully suggest
• 00:3900:39, 23 December 2015 diff hist +391‎ Talk:Synthetic cannabinoids/Archive 1 ‎ →‎NEJM 2015

21 December 2015

• 20:5520:55, 21 December 2015 diff hist +155‎ NOx ‎ Noting that key definitions in the lead are tied to a single primary source, which is unacceptable.
• 20:5120:51, 21 December 2015 diff hist +268‎ User talk:Dennis Bratland ‎ →‎I am supportive: new section
• 20:4920:49, 21 December 2015 diff hist +647‎ Talk:NOx ‎ →‎Global cooling

20 December 2015

• 21:4621:46, 20 December 2015 diff hist +226‎ Talk:Sophie's Choice (novel) ‎ →‎Major Themes is Original research?
• 21:4621:46, 20 December 2015 diff hist −1‎ Talk:Sophie's Choice (novel) ‎ →‎Unsourced, problematic paragraph
• 21:4421:44, 20 December 2015 diff hist +157‎ Talk:Sophie's Choice (novel) ‎ →‎Unsourced, problematic paragraph
• 21:4221:42, 20 December 2015 diff hist +606‎ Talk:Sophie's Choice (novel) ‎ →‎Problematic editing
• 21:4021:40, 20 December 2015 diff hist +2,079‎ Talk:Sophie's Choice (novel) ‎ →‎Problematic editing
• 21:3821:38, 20 December 2015 diff hist +601‎ N User talk:Arohanui ‎ ←Created page with '==No agenda driven edits== The recent edits were not agenda driven, but they were ''accuracy'' driven, and based on published secondary source content, as WP req...'
• 21:3421:34, 20 December 2015 diff hist −1,744‎ Sophie's Choice (novel) ‎ →‎Inspiration and themes: Moving unsourced paragraph to Talk.
• 21:3021:30, 20 December 2015 diff hist +150‎ Sophie's Choice (novel) ‎ →‎Plot summary: Added explanatory note in the markup, regarding one of the section tags.
• 21:2721:27, 20 December 2015 diff hist +9‎ User:Leprof 7272 ‎No edit summary
• 21:2521:25, 20 December 2015 diff hist +618‎ User:Leprof 7272 ‎ Adding opening paragraph.
• 21:0921:09, 20 December 2015 diff hist +120‎ User:Leprof 7272 ‎ →‎Content of which I am inexplicably proud, along with date posted
• 21:0021:00, 20 December 2015 diff hist +149‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Clinical and postmortem findings: Making clear last sentence is also from Froberg, and adding note to dubious closing statement.
• 20:5120:51, 20 December 2015 diff hist +6‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Animal cases: checking markup for wikilink

19 December 2015

• 17:1417:14, 19 December 2015 diff hist +765‎ Duck Soup (1927 film) ‎ Adding some Further reading, to begin to move this to be a sourced article
• 16:1216:12, 19 December 2015 diff hist +25‎ Oliver Hardy ‎ →‎Early life and education

16 December 2015

• 19:1919:19, 16 December 2015 diff hist +250‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Noteworthy cases: Adding Ford case to notable cases
• 19:1419:14, 16 December 2015 diff hist +1,102‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ Adding forensic case to Tox section
• 19:0319:03, 16 December 2015 diff hist +583‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Further reading: Added forensic citation to Further reading.
• 18:1618:16, 16 December 2015 diff hist +17‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎To humans: Tried unsuccessfully to find any source for this, and was unable. Leave tags until sourced.
• 17:5917:59, 16 December 2015 diff hist −41‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ Removing "disseminated intravascular coagulation" from the lede, as it only is sourced to a primary source, where it is reported as a novel finding..
• 17:5517:55, 16 December 2015 diff hist −2‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Anatomy and host range: Making section tag accurate
• 17:5417:54, 16 December 2015 diff hist −14‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Active agent (cantharidin): Shortening over-long section title

14 December 2015

• 02:5602:56, 14 December 2015 diff hist −710‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Sexual desire: A citation to a French book in the late 1800 century cannot be used to support this claim, via an editor supplied English translation, lacking a page number no less.
• 02:5402:54, 14 December 2015 diff hist −909‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Sexual desire: Reference to commercial site selling Spanish fly removed. Sentence marked as dubious until sourced.
• 02:5202:52, 14 December 2015 diff hist +67‎ Lytta vesicatoria ‎ →‎Cantharidin: First to paragraphs unsourced, except for a dated primary source. This opening is therefore WP:OR

5 December 2015

• 05:0605:06, 5 December 2015 diff hist +314‎ User:Leprof 7272 ‎ Leprof_7272 editing

3 December 2015

• 13:4113:41, 3 December 2015 diff hist +17‎ Polyvore ‎ →‎History: Expanding non-encyclopedic, single time-use abbreviation
• 13:3913:39, 3 December 2015 diff hist +23‎ Polyvore ‎ →‎History: Poor word choice/syntax -- the person making a statement is not "quoting" (we are, in re-stating)
• 01:1901:19, 3 December 2015 diff hist +32‎ Childhood's End ‎ The phrase "trancendent evolution" appears only once, in the lead, and without citation. Ascribing this theme to ACC and basing it in Stapledon is WP:OR until a published source appears.
• 00:4400:44, 3 December 2015 diff hist +2,485‎ Marc Cohn ‎ Provided further material on the carjacking, and an extensive quote others can remove, or use. Le Prof Tag: possible BLP issue or vandalism

2 December 2015

• 19:4619:46, 2 December 2015 diff hist +1,013‎ Memphis, Tennessee ‎ →‎Early history: This paragraph is unsourced. tennesseeencyclopedia.com citation contains nothing regarding its content, but is simply general source for La Salle (as placement now makes clear). Correcting opening sentence, next paragraph, to source.
• 17:5217:52, 2 December 2015 diff hist −1‎ Marc Cohn ‎ →‎Personal life: Same as preceding.
• 17:4917:49, 2 December 2015 diff hist +12‎ Marc Cohn ‎ →‎Personal life: copyedit to improve appearance of citation
• 17:4717:47, 2 December 2015 diff hist +584‎ Marc Cohn ‎ replaced blacklisted NYT query URL with new acceptable source, adjusting text as necessary to match information in this source
• 17:2517:25, 2 December 2015 diff hist +6‎ Marc Cohn ‎ replaced blacklisted NYT query URL with acceptable direct URL
• 17:2117:21, 2 December 2015 diff hist −72‎ Marc Cohn ‎ →‎Personal life: Setting up NYT citation to repair poor citation format using reflink

27 November 2015

• 17:2817:28, 27 November 2015 diff hist +4,224‎ Urbanspoon ‎ Sourced update since close of operations June-October 2015.
• 16:3116:31, 27 November 2015 diff hist +2,157‎ Talk:Urbanspoon ‎ →‎Here is further content: new section
• 16:1516:15, 27 November 2015 diff hist +36‎ User talk:14.202.0.244 ‎ →‎Please only add information