User contributions for 24.15.131.32
12 January 2015
- 02:4002:40, 12 January 2015 diff hist −1 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: "tensioning" isn't a word so I changed it to tension
- 02:3602:36, 12 January 2015 diff hist +4 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: link
- 02:3502:35, 12 January 2015 diff hist 0 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: too many then and thens
- 02:3102:31, 12 January 2015 diff hist +4 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: link (I've never heard of a "patent thicket" before, what an interesting concept
- 02:2902:29, 12 January 2015 diff hist +13 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: link
- 02:2502:25, 12 January 2015 diff hist −11 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: "design" and "designed" were too close to each other -- a different term was need
- 02:2102:21, 12 January 2015 diff hist +1 Sewing machine →Industrial competition
- 02:1902:19, 12 January 2015 diff hist +3 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: link, also parentheses should not be used in an encyclopedia entry the way this one was
- 02:1502:15, 12 January 2015 diff hist +6 Sewing machine →Industrial competition: link
- 02:1202:12, 12 January 2015 diff hist +1 Sewing machine →Industrial competition
- 02:1202:12, 12 January 2015 diff hist −89 Sewing machine →Invention: years need commas
- 02:1102:11, 12 January 2015 diff hist +1 Sewing machine →Invention
- 02:1002:10, 12 January 2015 diff hist −1 Sewing machine →Invention: years need commas
1 December 2014
- 00:1600:16, 1 December 2014 diff hist −10 Prazosin →Medical use: "initially started" is redundant
31 August 2014
- 05:3105:31, 31 August 2014 diff hist −25 Johnny Rivers →1950s: saying he formed a band when he was in junior high while attending BR junior high is redundant. i also a comma
- 05:2805:28, 31 August 2014 diff hist 0 Johnny Rivers →1950s
- 05:2805:28, 31 August 2014 diff hist 0 Johnny Rivers →1950s: Unless you go around saying "what is your favorite The Rockets song", then don't capitalize "the"
- 05:2505:25, 31 August 2014 diff hist −59 Johnny Rivers →1950s: this flows better without the "and then this happened and this happened" narrative; also the important thing here is that he changed his name, not that he had hired an attorney do it for him which is implied
- 05:1905:19, 31 August 2014 diff hist −43 Johnny Rivers →1960s: brief rewriting
- 05:0705:07, 31 August 2014 diff hist −1 Johnny Rivers →1960s: you don't need a comma here
- 05:0405:04, 31 August 2014 diff hist −49 Johnny Rivers →1950s: Minor rewording
28 August 2014
- 21:5121:51, 28 August 2014 diff hist +1 Pamela Smart semi-colons added to clarify what she was convicted of
- 21:4921:49, 28 August 2014 diff hist +15 Pamela Smart another link
- 21:4621:46, 28 August 2014 diff hist +52 Pamela Smart link to maximum security
- 21:4221:42, 28 August 2014 diff hist +29 Pamela Smart adding "maximum security"
- 21:4021:40, 28 August 2014 diff hist +1 Pamela Smart No edit summary
- 21:3521:35, 28 August 2014 diff hist −25 Pamela Smart All that is needed is the link to the name of the town, not to the name of the town and to the state.
- 21:3121:31, 28 August 2014 diff hist +4 Pamela Smart lin to accomplice
- 21:2921:29, 28 August 2014 diff hist +19 Pamela Smart adding link to Sexual Partner
- 21:2721:27, 28 August 2014 diff hist 0 Pamela Smart superfluous hyphens
- 21:2621:26, 28 August 2014 diff hist +2 Talk:Pamela Smart →rewriting first paragraph
26 July 2014
25 June 2014
- 19:0319:03, 25 June 2014 diff hist +375 Talk:Coeliac disease →Avitaminosis: new section
- 18:5118:51, 25 June 2014 diff hist +1 Coeliac disease my mistake -- needed second bracket at beginning
- 18:4918:49, 25 June 2014 diff hist +16 Coeliac disease adding link to Avitaminosis
18 June 2014
- 19:4219:42, 18 June 2014 diff hist −37 Black Death (film) →Plot: copyediting
- 19:3319:33, 18 June 2014 diff hist −91 Black Death (film) →Plot: copyediting
- 19:2919:29, 18 June 2014 diff hist −68 Black Death (film) →Plot: copyediting
- 02:5002:50, 18 June 2014 diff hist +5 Black Death (film) →Plot
- 02:4702:47, 18 June 2014 diff hist +1 Black Death (film) →Plot
- 02:4502:45, 18 June 2014 diff hist +12 Black Death (film) →Plot: small edit
- 02:4402:44, 18 June 2014 diff hist +39 Black Death (film) →Plot: ooops
- 02:3902:39, 18 June 2014 diff hist +60 Black Death (film) →Plot: bit more editing
- 02:3702:37, 18 June 2014 diff hist +4 Cardiopulmonary resuscitation link
- 02:2002:20, 18 June 2014 diff hist 0 Black Death (film) →Plot: comma in the wrong place
- 02:2002:20, 18 June 2014 diff hist −26 Black Death (film) →Plot: bit of rewriting
- 02:1302:13, 18 June 2014 diff hist +1 Black Death (film) →Plot: comma
18 May 2014
- 22:0922:09, 18 May 2014 diff hist +512 Talk:Hank Williams →Garden Spot Recordings: new section
- 22:0122:01, 18 May 2014 diff hist +1 Hank Williams →1940s: adding comma
- 21:5921:59, 18 May 2014 diff hist 0 Hank Williams →Early career: commas, T to t
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