User contributions for 219.78.160.232
27 January 2015
- 11:1111:11, 27 January 2015 diff hist 0 Ed Balls →Fined for failing to stop after a car "crash": Removed scare quotes. Put in word used by source. Changed 5 to five in line with style. Changed "license" to UK spelling.
14 January 2015
- 09:4309:43, 14 January 2015 diff hist −7 Chinese Maritime Customs Service Replace "bifurcation" with simpler and shorter word "split"
13 January 2015
- 04:1604:16, 13 January 2015 diff hist −4 Funky Cold Medina →In popular culture: Replaced "numerous" with shorter "many"
- 04:0304:03, 13 January 2015 diff hist −22 Funky Cold Medina →In popular culture: Replace euphemism "engages in intimate relations" with shorter "has sex".
- 03:5403:54, 13 January 2015 diff hist −28 Funky Cold Medina Shortened and simplified sentence
12 January 2015
- 07:1907:19, 12 January 2015 diff hist −2 Low Fell →Economy: removed superfluous scare quotes on residential suburb
4 January 2015
- 09:2509:25, 4 January 2015 diff hist +2 Little Fish (2005 film) →Plot: Removed scare quotes
- 09:2309:23, 4 January 2015 diff hist −2 A Place to Call Home (novel) Removed US bias
30 December 2014
- 08:2108:21, 30 December 2014 diff hist −369 Peter Symonds College →Boarding: Rewrote in encyclopaedic style.
28 December 2014
- 13:5313:53, 28 December 2014 diff hist −109 Kat Stewart →Personal life: Copy editing: give more encyclopaedic tone; removed unbacked reference to 2008 being important professionally; corrected name of Red Stitch
- 11:0111:01, 28 December 2014 diff hist −64 Smithereens (book) Shortened and simplified sentences
- 10:5810:58, 28 December 2014 diff hist −24 Preincarnate (novel) Shortened and simplified sentence
- 05:2205:22, 28 December 2014 diff hist −47 Black Christmas (1974 film) →Development: copy editing
- 05:1405:14, 28 December 2014 diff hist −62 Black Christmas (1974 film) →Production: minor copy editing
27 December 2014
- 12:0712:07, 27 December 2014 diff hist −2 Tutoring →Private Tutoring in Asia: gave date of study as "recent" is vague
- 12:0512:05, 27 December 2014 diff hist −11 Tutoring removed "pejorative" as it is a value judgement.
26 December 2014
- 08:4708:47, 26 December 2014 diff hist 0 Theme from Shaft →Personnel: Renamed as "musicians" because "personnel" is jargon
25 December 2014
- 11:3911:39, 25 December 2014 diff hist −37 Andouille Shortened and simplified sentence
24 December 2014
- 08:5808:58, 24 December 2014 diff hist −26 Kling Klang Studio Simplified sentence
16 December 2014
- 11:5811:58, 16 December 2014 diff hist −12 Convair B-58 Hustler →Aircraft on display: copyediting
- 11:4911:49, 16 December 2014 diff hist −71 Japanese popular culture →Film: Removed reference to Godzilla studio as not relevant to subject of article
15 December 2014
- 11:0511:05, 15 December 2014 diff hist −11 Nim Shue Wan →Temple: made sentence active
- 10:3510:35, 15 December 2014 diff hist −320 Sterling area copy editing
12 December 2014
- 13:2313:23, 12 December 2014 diff hist −6 The Bedford Incident →Historical parallels: Removed scare quotes and unnecessary italics
- 13:0713:07, 12 December 2014 diff hist −5 The Bedford Incident →Historical parallels: Removed "uncanny resemblance" and rewrote in encyclopaedic style
- 12:0312:03, 12 December 2014 diff hist −7 London and Southampton Railway →Opening at last
- 10:4810:48, 12 December 2014 diff hist −1 Southern Railway (UK) →Other forms of traction
- 10:3910:39, 12 December 2014 diff hist −1 MV Pelikan No edit summary
- 10:3710:37, 12 December 2014 diff hist +19 MV Pelikan No edit summary
- 10:2710:27, 12 December 2014 diff hist +16 Southern Railway (UK) →Chairmen of the Board of Directors: Removed errant capitals
- 10:2510:25, 12 December 2014 diff hist −78 Southern Railway (UK) →General Managers: errant capitals removed
- 10:2210:22, 12 December 2014 diff hist −10 Southern Railway (UK) →Chief Mechanical Engineers: copy editing. removed errant capitals
- 10:2010:20, 12 December 2014 diff hist 0 Southern Railway (UK) →Other engineers: Removed errant capitals. copy editing
- 10:1810:18, 12 December 2014 diff hist −110 Southern Railway (UK) →Heritage: copy editing. removed superfluous detail
- 10:1610:16, 12 December 2014 diff hist −84 Southern Railway (UK) →Wagons: copy editing. shorter, active sentences
- 10:0710:07, 12 December 2014 diff hist −4 Seoul–Pyongyang hotline No edit summary
- 10:0710:07, 12 December 2014 diff hist −93 Seoul–Pyongyang hotline Copy editing
- 09:3109:31, 12 December 2014 diff hist +103 Moscow–Washington hotline →In popular culture: Inserted subheadings
- 09:1809:18, 12 December 2014 diff hist −8 Moscow–Washington hotline →Use
- 09:1709:17, 12 December 2014 diff hist −49 Moscow–Washington hotline →Usage: Copy editing.
- 09:0109:01, 12 December 2014 diff hist −2,506 Moscow–Washington hotline →In popular culture: Removed references that were not about Moscow-Washington hotline
- 08:4808:48, 12 December 2014 diff hist −99 Hong Kong Resort Company removed redundant text. Joint ventures between two partners are by definition 50%/50% ownership
- 03:2403:24, 12 December 2014 diff hist −655 Discovery Bay →Community, recreation and entertainment: Copy editing to shorten, and remove PR-style elements.
10 December 2014
- 13:4913:49, 10 December 2014 diff hist −14 Jackboots on Whitehall →Reception: Replaced "have been somewhat" with "were"
8 December 2014
- 02:3002:30, 8 December 2014 diff hist −27 Lantau Trail →Stages: minor copy editing.
7 December 2014
- 13:1313:13, 7 December 2014 diff hist −19 1950s in Hong Kong →Rising buildings: Substituted "prompted" for longer "served as the impetus for a"
- 13:1113:11, 7 December 2014 diff hist −15 1950s in Hong Kong →Population: Removed first three words as they were redundant
5 December 2014
- 13:3813:38, 5 December 2014 diff hist −48 Chi Ma Wan →The Sea Ranch: Removed link. It is not an official site. It advertises a privately owned apartment for sale.
- 13:3713:37, 5 December 2014 diff hist +85 Chi Ma Wan →External links: Health warning on external site
- 13:2713:27, 5 December 2014 diff hist +396 Talk:Discovery Bay →Who is Wong?: new section